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Namwob_69 vs. Elfbomb
10-15 bars
all rulez aply you post 1st your post is due 1 hour after check in! have fun keep it real! |
Book of Elfbomb, chapter one, verse one
In which our young hero learns how it's done This is my intro to battling, hope I know what to do but enough about me, let's talk about you First off the bat, your name...what IS that? Sounds like baby talk, but babies don't 69, cat Even when you rollin' your style's just luck It's like a black hole in that all it does is suck I read your other battles, but it's hard cause they bore me It's like they're jumping up and down, yelling and screaming "Ignore me!" But from what I DID read, you really seem to think you're wicked Well I got news kid, your skill's as limp as your stick is See, I kept it clean there, but you just shouldn't provoke Me, I'll cut it off here, give you more time to choke |
Good shit... for a newb
Ya i might be a lil cocky you wining this battle is like a black man play'n hockey bust your face up! bitchs call me rocky talk shit about names "elfbomb" shit wit that name you prolly took you mom to prom you stay at home wit a good porn and a oily palm wit that weak ass post you think your the bomb! bitch your nut'n but a new class newb sit'n at your computer wit a dildo and a tube of anil lube wish'n you had a crew... to help ya wit the mess bitch you cant touch this skill its lyrical finess your nut'n but a bitch wit a dick and breast wit these lyrical slugs i leave holes in ya chest i put your lung in your hands so you can hold you breath send this message and send you to your lyrical death this bitch is an elf! after that post i ought to kill myself fuck, put done the mic cuz your skills were left on the shelf this bitch is afraid to disclose his location bitch your gods worst creation your dad told me you were just a premature ejaculation! that suck! hows it feel to be an ascedent, a mistake you won... then you woke and found out your nut'n but a fake! im done this is over! lets get some votes! and poll it up if ya can! Good Battle Elfbomb! |
ayo.................................... fuck some nice shit for both of ya.........
rhyme - 69 by like an inch punches - 69 word play - 69 ideas - elf my vote goes to 69 it was good battle though............ keep it up////////////////// can i get some vote on mine??? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102217 peace |
Elfbomb
Book of Elfbomb, chapter one, verse one In which our young hero learns how it's done Decent... Not great.. This is my intro to battling, hope I know what to do but enough about me, let's talk about you Weak.... First off the bat, your name...what IS that? Sounds like baby talk, but babies don't 69, cat Weak..... Even when you rollin' your style's just luck It's like a black hole in that all it does is suck Ok Punch...Still needs work I read your other battles, but it's hard cause they bore me It's like they're jumping up and down, yelling and screaming "Ignore me!" Good Punch.... But from what I DID read, you really seem to think you're wicked Well I got news kid, your skill's as limp as your stick is Not good at all..... See, I kept it clean there, but you just shouldn't provoke Me, I'll cut it off here, give you more time to choke Ok Punche...Needs work Overall... ya need help with punches Work on tha vocab too...... Good Structure Overall........13/20 Namwob_69 Ya i might be a lil cocky you wining this battle is like a black man play'n hockey bust your face up! bitchs call me rocky Weak...ok wordplay i guess.... talk shit about names "elfbomb" shit wit that name you prolly took you mom to prom you stay at home wit a good porn and a oily palm wit that weak ass post you think your the bomb! Ok punch.... needs work bitch your nut'n but a new class newb sit'n at your computer wit a dildo and a tube of anil lube wish'n you had a crew... to help ya wit the mess Weak...Needs work bitch you cant touch this skill its lyrical finess your nut'n but a bitch wit a dick and breast wit these lyrical slugs i leave holes in ya chest Played.... i put your lung in your hands so you can hold you breath send this message and send you to your lyrical death Played...but ok punch this bitch is an elf! after that post i ought to kill myself fuck, put done the mic cuz your skills were left on the shelf Weak...ok punch this bitch is afraid to disclose his location bitch your gods worst creation your dad told me you were just a premature ejaculation! Personal somewhat...punch was weak that suck! hows it feel to be an ascedent, a mistake you won... then you woke and found out your nut'n but a fake! Ok punch....CHOPPY tho Overall... ya verse was pretty weak Needs help with structure..BIG TIME Punches need to hit harder i'd give you........14./20 Overall... this battle was weak... Newbie battle of course.... Ya both need to elevate a bit Elfbomb's structure was pretty good.. But ya both need help on vocab... and punches Vote=Namwob_69 He simply had a lil bit better punches |
im 2 up 3 more and we can close this shit wit a K.O. aight!!!!
----------------------LETS SEE THA VOTES!-------------------------------- illunatic, thanks for the tips dogg! |
LETS GET SOME MOTHA FUCK"N VOTES GOD DAMN!-------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Well let me see here
Open: 69 simply because Elfbomb shit was hot garbage Punches 69 put your lung in your hands so you can hold you breath damn that shit was tight. and there was more to read. elf had his moment I read your other battles, but it's hard cause they bore me It's like they're jumping up and down, yelling and screaming "Ignore Me"" That was the only good punch by elf though. Metaphor: 69 easily he actually had more then one Close: 69 Winner: 69 by far hey Elf elevate you will be aiight though |
its 3 up hit me up wit 2 more and we close this wit a KO!
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69 took dis one for better flow and humor.
but since my vote dont count i dont matter................ vote 69....................... |
aight lets get this over wit i need some ppl to poll vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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