(just cause i forgot) Adebisi vs. dirtboy69
 

4 bar min.
16 bar max.

verses due by friday night(cause it started late)

no check in just post your verse

voting rules same as in the rest of the league, no dick riding, bull shit votes, votes must be explained.

good luck i'll have my verse by tomorrow morning

I'm raw, shit, just watch me blaze dude
You changed your title?
Shit you shoulda changed ya name too!
Its a bitch move, leaving my out....
Especially since you need me, Quo, and Baron
To give this league an ounce of clout
Take this bout with ease, I cant help it G
I mean who loses...
...To the kid who tried to hype a text LP
And for the last time, I'll explain this, dumb shit
This was not 4 bars!!!! It was 4 fucking couplets

i'm sorry for my poor spelling just put up with it

adebisi your volcab's so basic and your flow's like my audio//
i may have lost 15 times but shit i'll still beat you when we go//
your gettin crushed like caught between two transports speeding//
when crossing the street in the middle of a busy intersection//
couplet?? damn this fagot's reading just too much poetry//
given a book of it by your boyfriend fag it's plain to see//
that this kid's been in more asses then a gay proctoligist//
no punches open fists your smacking with those limp wrists//
none of your shit's hurtin like i was paralized below the neck//
could let you have a team still your punches won't have effect//
cause every single one of your lines are played out and weak//
like william hung you suck and you must be some sort of geek//

mah let the voting begin

votes???? this does count in the standings

I gotta go wit DirtBoy on this one........... His shit flowed better and punches were there, personals too. It didn't seem like Adebisi even tried. I expected a long ass angry verse since he was bitchin so much about lettin him in this week and all I got was ^^^ that?

Vote: DirtBoy69

uppin over the no shows

Aight Check Dis..

Adebisi: 6/10
Even Though Short, Your Punches Were Felt. You Got The Point Across With Little Lines. Flow Was Aight, But No Mulits and Metaphors In There. Style Is Kinda Wack.

Dirtboy69: 6.5/10
Your Flow Was Offf, Sum Of Your Lines Didn't Even Ryhme. Um..Word Usuage Would Be Nice. But You Won This Becasue Of Your Effort and The Punches You Threw. I Like Stretched Lines...Not Short As Shit Lines. It's Text and I Wanna Read!!!

Vote - Dirtboy69

~R~

And yet again relaunched voters dont know how to read

Adebisi .....punches were ok but your basic vocab lost dis battle for you dawg...overall....4/10
Dirty....your lines were more complex and punches were nice...0verall...7/10
v/dirty

Yo No offense dirt, I know you started all this an everything, but there are a lot of people in this league who can take you wit a flow like that. I'd hate to admit it but adebisi was even worse. at least Dirt Boy had a few complex lines and good vocab. he couldnt spell the words but he still used them good. The only thing you need to work on is ya flow dirt. Adebisi needs to work on everything.

V= Dirty BOy

dirtboy wins 4-0