Juss_Blaze vs. Godfather
 

ima get you with this

u dead wrong if you think u gon jerk and bitch me/
becuz i hire foreign shooters like Dirk Nowitski/
lets get this over dog, i will murk you quickly/
you couldnt kill me even if you drove and swerve to hit me/
lets get this started, ill make it ova right now/
you gotta fuckin pay me to throw the mic down/
man FUK rap im gonna start a bolder fight now/
with spiked chains and baseball bats to pipe down/
im startin shit now, battle back, what's good dog?/
you dont respect me, but you know u should dog/
you wanna act bad and big like Shug?/
then FUK guns i bring a fukin bulldog in yo hood dog/
im Dr. Dre, and you the fukin ho he slapped, Bitch/
i hope u know that i got more steel than blacksmiths/
since when u wanna battle and start this rap shit/
before today the only shit u ever rapped was a sandwich/
keep playin dog, till your fukin face gets gnawed off/
with pocket knives, M-16s, and sawed offs/
after my rhyme quit flowin and my raps they answer/
you be in your hood tip toeing like a ballet dancer/

you win? not possibly true.. and dont take it hard when you lose
cause sportsmanship ain't tennis on a Carnival cruise
garner a clue, and stab your mom, if you think we have a bond
your metaphors are ancient, all you do is Babylon(babble-on)
you got a shitload of haters, and it's got me to ponder
that maybe I should put the bat down and give Jesus the honours
wreck with text? nah, you just a wreck with text
I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs
punched you three times, then you asked to talk it out
my reasoning got you wobbly and the forthright knocked you out
Blaze felt violated and demanded a whistle
then 'excercised his rights' and broke his hand on the pillow
watched you stand vigil... stealing my lines with your wackness
fact is, your more turncoat then nike reversible jackets
Blaze will never win a battle especially with me in it
URE style is like The College BCS.. just without the C in it!
We both sucked ya mom's tits, our only likeness in war
Like Sub. teachers, no one cares what ya write on the board
I'm parting the ground, you get dropped from the aftershock
There's no 'market' for clowns, your the only 'laughing stock'
You have to stop, desperation's a sign of blue balls..
I jacked your thinking cap, but it was 5 sizes too small
Start expecting harm, what's your Race? I'm baffled
You 'bet the Farm', and now you have no place to battle
Claim you're the best right? But you tend to clown a lot
Writing is like your sex-life, never been around the block

when over a lil g/l

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i liked jus blazes style it wuz sick and both flowed good..like structure betta wit blaze...punchlinez wurr equal...vote blaze
come vote on any YoungStar* battle..much love

i vote balze, though i hear alot of eminem in that, punches great
7/10

godfather, also i liked it but prefer blaze, ur good just a bit overdone for me
5/10

Vote: Juss Blaze

the Count is still 0-0 these votes r lazy u probably pmed this to newbie and voted on there battle

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I liked blaze's style and tenactiy. Except he kinda stayed on the weapons and killing theme a bit to much, no personals etc. I liked godfathers but it needed somework etc.
Nice shit on both accounts.

I'm actually giving this one to Godfather, Its was not as easy to read, as blazes but I thought when I did get through them, his punches and personals hit alot harder. I will give props to Blazes flow. Godfathers opener was good, both used good metta'. Godfathers was a little bit to long, and maybe next time you could try and cut simple words out, but thats just a suggestion.


Peace
Da Vinci

P.S I got a battle of my own open for votes, check it out
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116046

ok impendence i don't understand your vote so its 1-0 uppin for votes

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* Opener: JB (better flow, felt harder)
* Closer: Tie
* Overall Flow: JB (Godfather's verse was also smooth; just had a few more instances of awkward wording than JB's)
* Battle Stance: JB (JB was super-aggressive throughout. Though GF's verse was also aggressive, he was a bit laid-back in places, going more for the "clowning the opponent" angle. Nothing wrong with that, and it tends to yield higher marks for Creativity.)
* Creativity: Godfather
* Punches: Godfather (JB had good ones; GF had equally good ones and more of them)
* Rhymes: Godfather

If there was a category for "stupid post-battle bitching", Godfather would get that one too, for lameass remarks like "u probably pmed this to newbie and voted on there battle". But I only judge the battles themselves.

Close match, but the vote goes to Godfather for more complex and inventive rhyming and wordplay, plus he had the best line IMO with "I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs".

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2-0 uppin for votes on this one

godfather won this
cuz u got that foreign shooters from reading my battle