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Formation 07-26-05 06:24 AM

Formation:A Walk In My Shoes
 

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Come And Walk With Me, I'll Show You How Life Is
I Bin There Done That Hustled More Then Twice Kid
It's A Nice Fib.....To Say You Bin In My Shoes When
Your Clues Tend To Break When You Let Rules Bend
So I'm Telling You My Life And How The Pain Started
When My Dad Wasn't There I Was Left Slain Hearted
Never Get A Break,Cause I'm Awake Till The Morning
Paranoid....So You Know My Head Feel The Warning
In My Early Childhood I Was Raised To Think, Sin No
Now I Can't Get Any Sleep... Till My Brain Drinks Info
I've Came Up A Long Way And I'm Only Spitting Facts
My Mind Tends To Stop...So I Think Of Quitting Rap
I'm Careful Please Forgive Me For Taking No Chances
I Prayed A Thousand Times, I'm Waiting On Answers
My Thoughts Break Of Coarse The Seats Wetting Over
Self Conscious On The Mic So The Beats Getting Colder
I'm Humble On The Mic They Say I Tend To Act Rough
An I Might Not Show Out But On The Low I Rap Tough
Never Asked Dumb Questions Like Where My Dad Was
Cause The Fact Was Till Now I Never Even Had A Buzz
I'm Underrated....Though It Might Not Seem It At First
Good Things Turn Bad So I Got To Dream Of The Worst
I Know I Got Talent So Why Am I Sweating The Facts
But Let Me Tell You My Life I Was Just Getting To That
Moms Say I Got A Big Heart, So I'm Sending That Back
But I'd Take My Shirt Of For You And Lend You My Hat
I'm Breaking Down In Sweat Dawg But My Tears On Ice
And I Won't Stop...Till I Succeed All Of My Fears In Life
I'm Bout Tired Of This I'll Flip I'm Not Talking Front Back
I Don't Ask For Much...I Even Question Do I Want Rap
I've Sinned To Much It'll Be Hard God Please Forgive Me
And I Try Hard Not To Dawg But I Release More Sins See
Even Though I've Got Skill... I Feel That I Sound Whack
I Want To Quit But I Can't Do It Till I Really Found Rap
"Go Home You Can't Rap" That Shits All I Tend To Get
So Every Time I Got A Chance I End Up Calling It Quits
Though We All Make Mistakes I Feel I'm Making It Worst
Haven't Battled In Years So You Know I'm Aching In Thirst
My Guts Folding In Dawg But You Know I Came To Win
Split Personality.....So Every Time I End Up Blaming Him
And My Hearts In Pain So You Know I Struggle For Help
I Try To Fix A Mess Dawg.. But Tend To Trouble My Self
I'm Not Confusing Life.......But It Could Be A Lot Like Rap
And I know The Ratio's Is Different So It's Not Like That
I'm Up Till The Sun Shines......Just Writing New Tracks
My Girl I Got To Work And I'm Like Right I Knew That
Take A Shower Leave To Watch The Snow Clouds Melt
To Work With A Frown I Hate The Go In Crowd Smell
I Survive The Rap Ride....Just To Hold On Another Day
I'd Throw Away To Have My Sisters And Brother Stay
And When It's All Said And Done, Rap Is Just A Games
Dude's Will Doubt Me.....And Say Kid Your Just A Lame
The Cups Half Empty And Dawg It's Not Positive Pride
Man Life's A Struggle So You Know It's Hard To Survive
My Parents Left Dawg I'm On My Own I Live With Out Em
If They Ever Came Around Me I Know Why Bit I Doubt Em
And I'm Stating The True Facts Dawg Believe Me Or Not
When The Tables Turn You'll Be The On Eating Your Rot
I Know That You Hear Me, I'm Just Trying To Get Feed
And Let You See...... My Life Story Views If You Let Me

Thanks For Walking In My Shoes

Mr. Lyricist 07-26-05 06:13 PM

Oh . It sucked .

Christianite 07-27-05 12:05 AM

well i don't think it sucked, but it could have been better, was expectin more, couldn't really find a flow for it sounded a lil more like a poem, vocab, imagery, and emotion were good though, keep it up man

Chris Stylez 07-28-05 07:51 PM

Yo man i know how it is man.........I was really feeling it.......to me it sounds like one of dem tracts u aint tryin to be lyrical on and just throwin out dem facts and how u feel dawg......i know how it is to be hated and havin niggas sayin u cant rap and shit main.....dont let nobody tell you what you can or cant do cuz most of the time they hatin on they skills and if they can rap and shit they just hatin cuz they dont have the deep experiences u have that niggas can relate to...........So homie bottem line the drop was hot and i give it a 9/10


Keep it bangin


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