my songz.
 

check this out and tell what you think.
http://www.soundclick.com/viralknight
and if you don't like it :shoot: :nono:

hmmmmm......flow was off most of way...but i think u got potential dawg, some gud lyrics although some were abit played....keep droppin dawg n jus try a slightly simplier rhymin style until u get more experienced n confident on the mic.....peace!

will ya drop some feedback on my song...."change nothin" thanx!

man honestly, woznt too great...i think ya lil bro flowed better than u, lyrics were kinda shit no offence dawg u need some work.

tha remix woz .... poor too sorry. tha lyrics were aiight. u definetly need a lotta work on ya flow..definetly cuz. towards tha end u got better but still needs work. tha volume changed throughout tha whole thang so work on consitency

listening to heaven sent now ... u need to up tha volume of ya voice. tha flow is definetly kinda betta than tha others. dun like how u pause from ya rappin. try n hav a chorus. tha beats aiight.
keep working on ya self. u seem to hav potential but u need a lotta work. gud stuff but..
peace