Mc's Reaper /vs\ Mixtape
 

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no ridin
no bitin
no feedin
no free posting
no crew votes.
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Bitch you don't even know, the half about me/
I bring it straight to your chest, ask your staff about me//
I'm just a little bit older, plus a whole lot wiser/
I might advise ya, or I might pulverize ya//
I can visit any city, get respect in the street/
While you alone in your room, shook to death of the Reap.//
I'll take a second to speak, I keep my weapon in reach/
I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
I keeps a ghetto chick, that loves to blast and she peddle shit/
Groupies fake moves, I get her to settle shit//
You can't compare to the status right here/
Legendary worldwide, we can battle right here//
Listen junior, I'ma tear back your wig/
This ain't TV but I'll show you what a "Fear Factor" is//
Stop grillin me, and all that frontin is killin me/
You leave me no choice but to hurt your feelings G//

Face to face when our paws wreck, battling pussy fag's is nonsense…
Couldn't be over the top straddling spinning toy objects…
Fuck arms and knees, I wreck with steez, forget winning you could only come next to me…
You Couldnt leave cats battered like fried chineese recipies…
I'm hip-hop's ideal, I attack your wack ass and rip up style fields…
I scamble your brain with a spatula, still couldnt whip up ideas…
Reaper’s a fuckin baby, runnin, with one glare he's sent…
I come 'fast' like im prepared for lent…
Fuck Reaper, like during tear gas threats he'll be scared to vent…
This battle is beyond humeral, Cut jugulars to those attending your funeral…
You Couldn't step eye to eye, Reaper spitting his verse in roman numerals…
I rip heads because I was born with a fiend nature…
Fuck it, im leaving you grounded like Mothers of raging teenagers…
For embarrassment I took your mother and fucked her…
Brought out the ford Duster and eased past Reaper for my third win while passing truckers…
Take the remains of this kid, Smash his ass the scalp him…
Mixtape left your ass biting the dust like queen's album...

Yo mixtape got this fo sho...

BREAKDOWN

Bitch you don't even know, the half about me/
I bring it straight to your chest, ask your staff about me//
You rhymed me with me... kinda crap line too
I'm just a little bit older, plus a whole lot wiser/
I might advise ya, or I might pulverize ya//
Wack.. self-glorification = Herbs
I can visit any city, get respect in the street/
While you alone in your room, shook to death of the Reap.//
Umm another NO on this line
I'll take a second to speak, I keep my weapon in reach/
I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
That 2nd line was alright...
I keeps a ghetto chick, that loves to blast and she peddle shit/
Groupies fake moves, I get her to settle shit//
Rhymin shit with shit...and self-glorification
You can't compare to the status right here/
Legendary worldwide, we can battle right here//
Rhymed right here twice = NO
Listen junior, I'ma tear back your wig/
This ain't TV but I'll show you what a "Fear Factor" is//
Wheres the rhyme???
Stop grillin me, and all that frontin is killin me/
You leave me no choice but to hurt your feelings G//
Umm Weak Closer

OVERALL THERE WERE NO PUNCHES IN THIS SPIT FROM REAPER...

MIXTAPE im not explaining your whole shit but heres some key stuff..

Fuck arms and knees, I wreck with steez, forget winning you could only come next to me…
NICE
I scamble your brain with a spatula, still couldnt whip up ideas…
Nice
I come 'fast' like im prepared for lent…
nice wordplay again

As you can see those 3 lines were better then Reapers...

Its Over

Vote - Mixtape

Uppin(1)............Vote People Cmon...leave a Link if ya want.....

Uppin(2)...Vote People Cmon....Leave a Link If Ya Want.....

mc reaper- your punchers personals were all there word they were great man but they just wornt contecting cuz your word play sux it could have been way better if you had swicted a couple things


mix- you were just there are together

v/ mix

go poll your vote mix man

Mix-Nice spit........You came good with the Hittin some was pretty aight
some was ok.....you had everything uncluding similies not that much
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

Mc-Aight but not that good....Work on something, structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more also the similies and metaphores
work.....But keep elevatin and work
v/Mix

return the fav please fam http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

aight aight, just pay attention to my next battle coming up soon and see how I actually flow compared to just a freestyle like the one I did here.

Uppin(3)....vote people cmon...leave a link if ya want

Uppin(4)...VOTE PEOPLE CMON....Leave a link if ya want.......

Aight...........

MC's Reaper: you got a little off topic with the "I keeps a ghetto chick, that loves to blast and she peddle shit/Groupies fake moves, I get her to settle shit//" shit, in which you rhymed shit with shit, that's not good, you also rhymed right here and me twice as well, and you got a pretty weak punches where if you modify it a little it might have turned into dope punches. On the positive side, the flow was pretty good but thats about all..........

Mix Tape: Your shit was pretty good structured, it was also creative at some point, and the best thing bout your spit, is that your punches kept hitting hard, on the negative side, i didn't like the closer, but your shit is good overall, keep it up!

V/ Mixtape

anyway, can any of yall plz put an honest vote in my battle?

heres the link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128220

peace