2 time vs. lyrical mc
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
if your verse isn't about your topic at all your dq'd
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

topic provided by coo coo capone: compare yourself to your favorite emcee

this is for extras points so show up

checkin in...is dis a topical battle????

checkin in

2 Time loeser his Punch contacted at sub zero
Couldn't spit his savour if you contraced a super hero,
So low hes herble wona-b- consistently bitiin',
He Mentaly lackin' as he is lyrical fightin',
His punch neva thrown like a lapra grandin',
Hip Hop carrer fadin' as if it were a pencil mark,
His rhyme potential is at minus figure chances dark,
Flow danned like hover blocked by wackness,
Admits himself that dopeness is a rock drackness,
His Dopeness like a bong stamped out,
Been smoked along ago had his spout,
2 time beaten like eggs as his rhyme fails contacted,
He is feedin' rhyme like he is still spoon feed,"FACT",
Call him "glass bottle" the way MC's smash him,
He verbaly produces trash as if dope was a sin.

dog you a biter, i seen a post and traced it back
when my punches connect only time you face the facts
cuz im all real son, you a wasted act
i shit on you, leave you brown, and then waste a raq
taste a gat, fuck that i dont even need a hand
cuz this fairie light in the loafers flyin high like peter pan
i dont fuck wit faggots, go back to whereever you from
youd be smart to get ya boys, but together you dumb
whatever and come, ill give you props for showin up
you bangin is when i put C4 on ya cock and blow it up
stock i dont need an avatar to grab a bar from a catalog
and have a log thats enough to make a verse//
but captains log reads battles on so im heard like cattles on
a graze blaze this vagabond and take the hurse//

^^^^ it was suppose to be a topical don't you read the fucking rules??? shit i don't know i guess this might be my fault. i won't dq shit since you both showed and both didn't use the topic i guess this battle goes on by it's only for regular points now

breakdown for 2 time:

flow:pretty good nothing special but overall 7/10

volcab:kinda basic but got the job done 6/10

punches:best line,"cuz this fairie light in the loafers flyin high like peter pan" kinda played but most of your punches were not bad though 6/10

overall:19/30 pretty good verse considering it was suppose to be a topical

breakdown for lyrical mc:

flow:alright kinda average but 6/10

volcab:pretty good pretty then your oppenent 7/10

punches:best line,"Hip Hop carrer fadin' as if it were a pencil mark," nice and i havn't heard too much like it aside from that it was kinda weak but 7/10

overall:20/30 solid verse

vote--lryical mc better punches and volcab edged it out here

1-0 to me...uppin dis

lyrical took vocab and punches....2time took flow by a little
both spit well
lyrical took vocab and punches by 2 or 1
2Time took flo by 1

WTF^^^^YOUR SHITS CONFUSING YOUNGSTAR!

Aight Break'N It Down...

Lyrical MC: 6/10
Flow Was Durr, And The Punches Was Hot. Mulits and Metaphors In This Battle Wasn't Even Durr. But Yea..Like Ya Style. Keep Dropping Dope Ish.

2 Time: 4/10
Your Flow Was The Only Thing Going For You, Didn't Like Your Punches That Much. You Didn't Have Multis or Metaphors Either!! Just Elevate and Keeping Dropping Dope Ish.

Hmm...Lyrical Has Had It Easy So Far, I Wonder If He'll Face Me Next!? IF So, WOuld Love A Topical Battle Or Sumthing Fun.

Vote - Lyrical MC

~R~

2-0 to me....uppin

iight thanks for the votes...dont forget man..we still here

more votes...uppin!

damnn i was feelin both verses
but lyrical MCs verse standouts he had some good punches and good vocab 2 time had good vocab and good punches too both of yall really did yo thing but
somebody got 2 wins so ill got 2 da best line Call him "glass bottle" the way MC's smash him,
so lyrical mc wins by dat close battle

3-0 to me uppin dis shit :D

3-0 win for lyrical mc you get 7 points for a shutout win but not ten for a special match cause you didn't follow rules