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Jay 3rd 03-21-07 10:40 PM

Hard To Find.. Some deep shit man
 
iight this song is about the people i lost these past few years and how i lost them.. so i made this song to have people listen and rethink they're actions sometimes. cuz just stopping and thinkin of what could happen can save a few lives..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=408535

Replied to:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240633

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240682

Jay 3rd 03-23-07 12:24 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^uppin

.Eternal. 03-23-07 09:21 PM

^ stfu u aint good too...

and...i know what u gonna say
*dont talk shit when u dont make music*

lol..

u look like a fuckin crackhead.


anyways

cool beat...i used it b4...

Willa 03-26-07 01:46 PM

oK BEAT IS COOL ALOT OF PEOPLE HAVE USED IT
yOU SOUND LIKE YOUR STRUGGELING FOR AIR OR SOMETHING
emotion is ok could be upped a little
flow is pretty good but could improve a bit
You sound like your talking in some parts you really go off beat. Try and hti the snares

Decent track

Jay Rose 03-26-07 06:54 PM

hahah....another jay rappin on this track....lordy lordy...yea nice concept but man, this beat needs to be shitted on....you just tell a story and dont do it justice..not to sound concited but check out how i hit this beat up...thas that kinda flow you need to hit this beat up with.....nice lyrics n concept tho...i just keep comparing it to my track n i dont think yours stacks up well .....


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