generic disease vs PreZidict
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
12 lines max.

goodluck

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 04-18-05 at 08:25 PM

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generic disease has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-18-05 07:28 PM.

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-18-05 07:32 PM.

thorn a killa?? please, been here "longer" than me & still "fallin off" like glueless weave
u got "gerber" lines.........even when "babies" read ya shit dey dont give u "feed"*
u should be ashamed of ya raps, son jus "hide yaself" like "disgraceful bats"
any1 who reads ya writtens jus laugh, cuz dis "puss not focused" like "distracted cats"
"disease a crotch"..........u create da "illness" inside "nook"**
funny, u gettin more "zeros put in ya frame" than a name "portrait of murda mOOk
PreZ got him shook, u "nervous" let go ya "pen" before u "scare da book!"
u baked nigga but far from cooked, my lyrics indicate a vet...urs signal a rook!
"mammal rings"..............u gon get "married 2 animals"
y u put "meat" on da screen?? my verse "ate" urs like a digital "cannibal!"

nigga u slay me, i prey-thee...keep ya "ass seated" like ya "crack is lazy"
move packs..fiends pay me, while dis "rabbit's generic disease" consists of "rabies"***


*babies eat gerber so its obvious dat gerber is a baby food (DUH)
**nook (nookie)......also known as pussy, etc.
***his names "thorn" and "generic disease" is his alias

yo check it

im battlin this bitch for the hell of it, im gunna swat this prick
he doesnt even got respect for himself
.................................he named himself "PREZ-A-DICK!"
ill give it to you straight, homie you just flat out suck
his chances of lossin is like a thunder storms hitten..
...then hes gunna get struck!
your bein ripped, you and your rhymes are as soft as silk
niggaz family has to eat cereal wit forks...
........just to conserve milk!
just like ya sig, when he sees me he "always be movin"
cuz even if a vet was workin on ya....
............."ya still couldnt be improvin"
he cant catch up wit my lyrics, nah son your "too slow"
the only win in his record is when he paid the guy to "no show"
relatin to stats nigga, you always gonna be "below"
cuz son you couldnt find luck...
....even if you found a pot of gold on a rainbow

12 lines..if you dont get personals dont vote.

aight son..........good verse...........everybody use dat line about my sig tho..........niggas start votin

Voted For: generic disease

Ok This iS what i feel

GD
Ya Structure was slopp but ya verse made some sense althoough your opener was pretty weak id excuse You for that ........you should work on controlling your Structure bcuz all those marks makes it hard to read so ..... try to work oin that in the future

PD

Your structure was very sloppy to but .....your verse also lost me at some pionts which messed you up big time if you was trying to get some votes ....which is rally on of the main goals of the verse ..... I dont know what to tell you Except for try to elevate a little and youll get better

RTF .....IN Any of the battles in my sig HONESTLY DONT HATE VOTE PREZIDICT

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true @ about da structure...da shit was terrible i admit it...but chea i'll vote n no it wont be a hate vote lol

0-1

Good battle Prez, upppin..........................................

Voted For: generic disease

im battlin this bitch for the hell of it, im gunna swat this prick
he doesnt even got respect for himself
.................................he named himself "PREZ-A-DICK!"
^^^AVERAGE OPENER
ill give it to you straight, homie you just flat out suck
his chances of lossin is like a thunder storms hitten..
...then hes gunna get struck!
^^^IIGHT LINE
your bein ripped, you and your rhymes are as soft as silk
niggaz family has to eat cereal wit forks...
........just to conserve milk!
^^^^WAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKK N PLAYED
just like ya sig, when he sees me he "always be movin"
cuz even if a vet was workin on ya....
............."ya still couldnt be improvin"
^^^PRETTY GOOD LINE
he cant catch up wit my lyrics, nah son your "too slow"
the only win in his record is when he paid the guy to "no show"
^^^NICE LINE AS WELL
relatin to stats nigga, you always gonna be "below"
cuz son you couldnt find luck...
....even if you found a pot of gold on a rainbow
^^^DECENT CLOSURE

Generic Disease- MOS OF UR SHIT WUZ IIGHT.SUM PUNCHES CAME REAL WEAK BUT MANY LANDED. I LIKEED UR USE OF WORDPLAY AND PERSONALS TO TRY N MURK UR OPPONENT. ELEVATION IZ NEEDED NO DOUBT. SOM SHIT WUZ BASIC BUT FOR DA MOS PART UR VERSE WUZ PRETTTY AVERAGE.
7/10


PReZidict

thorn a killa?? please, been here "longer" than me & still "fallin off" like glueless weave
u got "gerber" lines.........even when "babies" read ya shit dey dont give u "feed"*
^^^IIIGHT OPENER
u should be ashamed of ya raps, son jus "hide yaself" like "disgraceful bats"
any1 who reads ya writtens jus laugh, cuz dis "puss not focused" like "distracted cats"
^^^O.K
"disease a crotch"..........u create da "illness" inside "nook"**
funny, u gettin more "zeros put in ya frame" than a name "portrait of murda mOOk
^^^HA HA GOOD LINE
PreZ got him shook, u "nervous" let go ya "pen" before u "scare da book!"
u baked nigga but far from cooked, my lyrics indicate a vet...urs signal a rook!
^^^NAHH NOT REALLY DAT GUD
"mammal rings"..............u gon get "married 2 animals"
y u put "meat" on da screen?? my verse "ate" urs like a digital "cannibal!"
HA HA HAD ME LAUGHIN

nigga u slay me, i prey-thee...keep ya "ass seated" like ya "crack is lazy"
move packs..fiends pay me, while dis "rabbit's generic disease" consists of "rabies"***
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE


PREZIDICT- MOS OF UR LINES RAN WAY TO LONG. UR STRUCTURE WUZ FUCKED.IT WUZ HARD 2 READ B/C OF TRYIN 2 CRAM 2 MANY LYRICS IN 1 LINE. I LIKED UR PERSONALS AND PUNCHES DOE. U NEED TO ELEVATE AS WELL. FOR A NEWB U R IIGHT. KEEP ELEVATIN N U B IIGHT.

MY V/ GENERIC DISEASE

CUD U CHECK OUT MAH BATTLE VS. LFS PLEASE VOTES AND FEED R NEEDED 4 BOF OF US
THANX

aight thank u 4 votin son......i'ma peep ya shit namean....0-2 i really needa work on da structure dat shit is killin me!

This was feedback posted for generic disease
 

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Voted For: PreZidict

v/prezidict
becuz...he had more complex harder hitting punches wit nice vocab added in there...he had original creative punches that hit pretty hard in dis battle..da baby food shit was dope.lol made me laugh a lil....da only negative bout ur verse was da structure...it was a lil off it was still easy to read but u could have closed da gaps and and make ya lines even up a lil more......
generic-your verse wasnt bad it just wasnt good enuff this time...u had some good things here and there u just wasnt consistent enough with it all..

^^good lookin on da vote dunny........1-2..........uppin 4 more votes

Voted For: PreZidict

i gave it tClosedo u man cuz u r hot is hell every thing was nice

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