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Sean Gunner 02-26-06 09:33 PM

Suspicious (4-0) vs. The Revelation (4-0)
 
Due Dates
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VERSES DUE Friday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST

VOTES DUE Sunday 9:00pm PACIFIC/12:00 Midnight EST

THERE ARE NO CHECK INS :)

Line Limit
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4 lines - NO SHOWS
14 lines - MINIMUM
Unlimited - MAXIMUM
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Voting

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- You must vote on 2 battles and post the links. For each vote less than 2 you fail to fulfill and post a link to, you will lose 1 vote on your own match. The league can't survive without voting, No excuses.

-No payback votes

-No 2nd Chance Votes

-No hate votes

- If your oponent no shows you are still required to vote on 1 battles. If you don't you will not recive the win.

Topics!
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218702

You don't have to Agree On Topics

Winner gets a bye to the championship match.

Sean Gunner 02-27-06 03:56 PM

Checking in, just because I can.

Method 03-01-06 06:21 PM

Melancholy Melody

OFFSPRING of love divine, Humanity!
To who, his eldest born, the Eternal gave
Dominion over the heart; and taught to touch
Its varied stops in sweetest unison;
And strike the string that from a kindred breast
Responsive vibrates! from the noisy haunts...
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Of mercantile confusion, where the voice becomes a prayer,
It is over-heard from the blaring meretricious glare
Of crowded theatres, where in the cheerless place,
Sits Sensibility, our watery eyes meet numbers of unlightened faces,
Dropping over fancied woes her useless tear was still,
"Come here, sit and weep with me; our substantial ills;
Torn from their natal shore, and doomed to bear unloving weather,
The breeze was cool as the ocean, sand was light as feathers
Sustain. Nor vainly let our sorrowed blood flow and stain,
Nor let the strong emotion make us cry and rise in vain
But may the kind contagion widely spread throughout the part,
Till in its flame we see the prize, the unrelenting heart
One bright blaze of sparks, the core of universal love,
Gone in grateful incense, rises up to heaven above
Formed with the same capacity of pain, cuts cleanse with salty seas,
The same desire of pleasure, delight, joy, and of ease
Why feels not man for man? When nature shrinks we vanish,
If Mother Nature returns to our land, she will be immediatley bannished

From the slight puncture of an insect's sting, no more nightmares or crime,
Faints if not screened from sultry suns, medicine leaves and pines
Beneath the hardship of an hour's delay, we swim out to sea,
Of needful nutriment and relaxation; when liberty...
Is prized so dearly, that the slightest breath can shade the day,
That ruffles but her mantle, the people can now awake
To arms, unwarlike nations, that can begin the rain,
Confederate states to vindicate and indicate her torrid claims
Why shall the suffering man, follow his nearing doom,
To ills he mourns, or spurns at? flowers with stripes that bloom
His quivering flesh; with hunger and with thirst and drinks oil,
Waste his emaciate frame?............... in ceaseless toils
Exhaust his vital powers; and bind his limbs 'til they're warm,
In galling chains and shackles?, shall he whose fragile form
Demands continual blessings, to support the poor and rude,
Its complicated texture; air, water and the food
To ask those mercies, whilst his selfish aim of remorse,
Arrests the general freedom while their sleepin' during the force?

Sean Gunner 03-03-06 10:32 PM

Sitting and Thinking

Many things happen when a person is just sitting and thinking,
He starts to notice the little things like smell and how he is breathing.
He experiences pain more like a child that has just began teething,
Rather than an adult, and then his mind begins seething.


What kind of world do we live in where the different are denied,
We laugh at the suffering and the government drinks the tears we’ve cried?
In a lake we drown in a civilization not built for the community,
The whole world is brainwashed but it’s obvious what they’re doin to me.
They cover up their lies with facts and manipulate till they are satisfied,
Death will only stop when every tear has cried and every person has died
Only then will we live again to continue the cycle is a world I call mine.
I won’t believe what they say because people lie same as people cheat,
They will kill over a foot of land if that means that they can rest their feet.
The only thing that oppresses the people is the people that feel feeble,
Mocking those who feel the pain and saying the murder of the future is legal.
People rejoice because they don’t hear the fire of bullets in an attack.
We shout to our gods and then we burn the people we feel inadequate,
We kill in the name of purity and the deaths are curin me,
Cuz the vision of the world keeps darkening and blurring.
I’m not alone in my feelings because through my fingers cry the blood of old,
Until I feel no more life in me, and all of my body stops cold.
We kill for survival praying for our Messiah’s arrival,
Always claiming the positive parts but never coming out of denial.
It’s been a while in life since we felt true fear and trials,
Cuz what we do we record for later and document the files.
Oversized engourged in lies sighing as they try relentless to find.
The truth we all seek in a world contaminated with the blood of generations,
Always live to grow and learn cuz no matter age you in an orientation.
The sound of a whistle shows us the cruelty in our beloved people.
Steeple after we steeple we shoot the horses that carry us,
Shovel after shovel we will continue to break those who bury us.
We break through the barriers and kill off the carriers,
Thinking we stop the pain once we kill the people who are starving us.
Keep ya ish settled and maybe you will see nirvana,
Cuz that is just a place of understanding the world through the bandana.
We emphasis manners yet rarely show the people an example,
We’re all just running with the bulls waiting to be trampled.
I don’t care if you believe who I am, just think about the words I speak,
I don’t look for fame, money, or reconition it’s knowledge that I seek.
Look for the truth though it’s buried and it may hide,
Behind any lie comes a statement with some kind of truth inside.

Method 03-04-06 09:53 AM

Gewd job Rev, probably the best VOW battle yet.

Sean Gunner 03-04-06 10:57 AM

You too man, enjoyed your piece.

Method 03-05-06 09:20 PM

Thanks bro, too bad no one votes anymore.

Method 03-11-06 08:43 AM

Thanks for the votes peeps.

Sean Gunner 03-11-06 05:07 PM

We need to vote on the battle of DQ and Red.

Method 03-11-06 06:51 PM

Yeh, I'll vote soon bro.

Sean Gunner 03-25-06 10:35 AM

I voted, your turn.

Dabatos 03-28-06 12:13 PM

lol.. man.. rev be doing topicals non-stop

Germ 03-28-06 06:02 PM

considering this was a month ago....yeah, how does he do it!!!

:rolleyes:


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