CarsonJetX2 'vs' The Disciple
 

Oh good....he said summin smart to me today.
I'll be glad to shut him up. ;)

Link-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153078
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1649626
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1651093

I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind...
Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine-
Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's..
Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's-
Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop-
Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop-
Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"...
I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted-
If you figured win...You must have mixed your division...
Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen

The Disciple

Leave ya Neck Rattled Ya Verze was Garbage and you had no punches shows ya Chest's Fragile.....
Kid's got Audio and Text comfused Wack Muhfuckah pickin up a MIC ina Text Battle.....
HMM, SET UP SEEMED LIKE THIS WAS PREWRITTEN, PUNCH WAS WHACK
Shit Talkin at 46-15 Ima leave this Bitch Chalked..punches make ya ReFraze ya Verze like takin back ya Lip Talk.....
Dancin to the Next Round ya Wack kid so take this L..Cause my punches will make this Crip Walk.....
OMG THIS IS STRECHED BARS AT ITS FINEST, WHACK PUNCH AGAIN
I Bless Geeks..Make ya Chest Bleed...And Im takin you outa round one...So i can just battle the Next Weak.....
You Bring Less Heat then a Pawn as a Chess Peice...So Watch how i get Siminilla for eatin this fuckin Fresh Meat.....
STRECHED, BAD PUNCH
This battle is like Bush vs. Afghanistan, You bringing knifes while I’m Packing rockets.....
Cuz Carson quick to Lose matches like Smokers with Holes in their pockets......
EHH IT WAS IIGHT BUT NOT WORDED WELL, AND BASICALLY SIMPLE
Its Been three hours since I took the call-to-blaze and no longer do I fall-to-haze.....
Like wanting calendars near toilets...., you wont show,.... just stall-for-days.....
THINK ABOUT IT AND IT DOESNT MAKE SENSE, SORRY

BASICALLY, YOU WERE STRECHED, WITH BAD PUNCHES AND IT LOOKED PREWRITTEN SO THATS NOT LIKE COOL DUDE...LOL. BUT FOR REAL IVE SEEN MUCH BETTER

CarsonJetX2
I could Lag lines, Rewind, And still your behind...
Your the reason RV look's like the Dolphin's FrontLine-
NAH I DNT LIKE VERY MUCH
Just leave, Trigga...your a waste of DNA stream's..
Everyone agree's, It's like you an Thuglife traded IP's-
LOL, PRETTY FUNNY, ALMOST BASIC BUT GOOD
Bitch please, Don't "LOL" at me. We all can read your drop-
Get half way down...turn around...all agree, and stop-
LMAO!GOOD JOB, LIKE THE PUNCH
Just like your Glocks....Desciple your "ghosted"...
I'm still tryna figure the logic, In why you posted-
PLAYD LINE FLIPPED IN A WAY TO SOUND NOT PLAYED :NONO:
If you figured win...You must have mixed your division...
Cross-multiplied your thought's, an hoped sum dik'rider's listen
NAH NOT GOOD

BASICALLY YOU STARTED GOOD AND FINISHD WHACK BUT YOURS HAD GOOD PUNCHS AND WASN'T STRECHED SO YOU WILL GET THE WIN AND I CAN TELL YOU WERENT EVEN TRYING OR WERE RUSHED

V//CARSON

ok this battle was aight i guess

Disciple..........ure flow was ok barely, structure was wack man, wats with all the fuckin stretched lines, that really let ure verse down. but punches are where it counts and i think that u had some nice ones. even though they were stretched they still hit, i understood them all, and the closer that Socrates say makes no sense, well i got the "Stall-for-days" part to it and shit. OVERALL 6.5/10

Carson..........u didnt even try did you. i mean the flow and structure was aight, the punches though were weak man. ure opener was tight, but then u just fell off more and more as you got to the end. i dont know whether it was lack of trying or whether u were rushed, but this verse was pretty weak man from you, i seen u do a lot better. OVERALL 6/10

V/ - Disciple

^^^^^REMOVE THIS VOTE NOW

He's an empire groupie....and we know how me an empire are....

REMOVE IT. -1

**One more thing.
If this is how the tournaments run.....
where u drop ur verse and then explain after sum one votes.
I dont want a part of it.

**Fix this or I just won't drop in round 2.
MAKE RULES.

^^^ i aint an Empire groupie at all.......................fuck u Vanilla Ice!!!

u know u didnt even try, i voted on disciple cuz his was better than ures.
but in truth, both ures were weak.

if u want my vote deleted cuz u think i am then fine
but if it is then u can keep yo ass out of my battle bitch!!!!

*DELETE THIS POST AFTER YOU READ IT*

Im not gonna get fair votes in here.

Withdraw me.
Arch....you shouldn't have even asked me to do this.
I can't handle 15 yr olds with 4 yr old mentality's.

I'm Out.

This was a wack battle from both....Disiple....your structure was horrible, flow was bad, and your punches were decent at best. Didn't really see any personals. vocab was basic, u had a few multies but with lines that long I woulda figured that you'd have more, metas were weak not very creative an you based them on played concepts, your closer was a pure example of what I mean by metas based on played concepts....try to be more original an hard hitting wit the punches an you'll be ah'ight.

Carson u definitely didn't put a lot of effort into your verse, u coulda made it a lil more entertaining at least, cuz your opener was fair, I caught it an saw what u were reaching for but jus wasn't worded in a way to make it hit as hard as it could have. Following bar was funny as hell but again not as hard as it could be, 3rd bar was a monster an it topped his whole verse cuz he had nothing that stood out, the rest of ya verse was like first 2 bars kinda jus there nothing special...but that was a harsh punch an got u win in my opinion.

Vote: Carson