Rhymes are tight. Just need help w/ flow
 

yo my rhymes are where i want them to be right now considering that i'm only 14, but i really need help with my flow. it's pretty good most of the time but i always have to rush myself and i can't really think of how to chop down the sentence and still have the general idea of what i'm tryin to say. Click here and listen to my tracks (only 2 of them) then please tell me what should i do. thanx

if that was actually you, that shit was off the hook, i like the scarface inserts, trhe canibus insert the blow there towards the end it was off the chain, now, is that ur album?

yea dogg that was me. it's hard to believe cuz im so young. but i take advanced english and literature classes and i freestyle all day. yea that is my album cover and i made it myself. im tryin to work on 19 tracks for it. and i got about 5 of them already done. i still wanna improve my flow though

first off, bullshit that that's you son
second off, if you're having trouble getting out what you're trying to say slow down, think of the words before they come out of your mouth
whenever you're just sitting around right down series of words that rhyme together and try to make some sense out of them, tell a short story
that way later on you'll have that shit memorized in a way, one word will automatically make you think of another word and so on.. that way you'll really "flow" and not get caught up

nice lyrics, you need some better equipment though

dont listen to that fucknut server, good rhymes man but server was right ur flow comes like this u only think of ur first line then while saying the first line think of the second line, thenn so on, when u do that it helps ur sylable count too, 13-16 a line

shit is garbage, i wud never buy that shit, "your lines loose like a hoes pussy" that line killed both of ur shits, u didnt haf any hot punchlines, its all dribble about shit people cant relate to, wtf do i care about cyancide, ya shit is ass son, u need to improve a lot, at 14 i was ten times sicker than that. ur young get better soon or use ur time for somethin else.