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e.coli vs B.I. Detained
5-6 bars (10-12 lines)
no crew.......hate.......d/r.........fan club votes if u are a herb please dont vote in this battle 1 hr. time limit.......time starts once u check in pz |
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Wordplay?? if you ask that yourself..dont Vote
*starts Keyin to the beat from Little House on the Prairy* E.Coli's just another Key in a Song I call.."The Merking Tune".. ..Beating me? be Real kid..jus like ya Avater, ya a Fake Cartoon another Pac ridin Loon..coz he thinks Mutual love brings Respect ..Except..for the Fact that none of RB can Relate to a Defect you're a Reject..a cast out Loner who finds Solitude in Wackness ..see you gotta be the Biggest Prick of all..a full blown Cactuss!! E.coli heard played Lines bout Viruses?..well i Bring summit New.. ..w/ the Flow N Structure in my Chek in..i hold more Heat than You ....jus like your current Loss Rate..B.I. just hit you for Six.... ..being an Acrobatic Actor..is the only way you'll ever Flip a Script |
u beat a herb and think your hard...its amazing
when the crackhouse burned... .....all BI’s dreams went down blazing the government hired him cuz bush likes his lips thats crazy shit... ...u think u an agent cuz u been hired to suck government dick this niggas starvin...so now he trys to eat pussy wit a knife youre a broke bum... ...thats why your content with the shitty things in life youre garbage hoe...there are some things u need to know you aint a man...u wouldnt have the biggest dick in a all lez porno BI thinks he is a beast cuz his mom is half cow even if u spit using verizon wireless... ...............we still wouldnt want to hear u now this battle is over...i merked u just for some enjoyment elton john likes BI cuz his throat stays deep like niggas on unemployment |
wtf????????????..............damn if he stole your verse leave a link or something.....there aint no need for all the extra comments cuz......
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lmao....wtf?? are you talkin about dumbass....
dayme...lmao...me bite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dayme...and you think I'd bite off you???????? who the fuck are you?? so many fuckin questions |
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dont put that bullshit in this thread........take that somewhere else.....quit tryin to clog our thread u fuckin hater
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Opening: BI
Punches: tie Personals: BI Vocab: tie Flow: BI Structure: BI Closer: e coli I hate to vote like that cuz it seems off but ur structure kinda fucked it all up e...Good verse thoo Return da favor by voting on me vs narcotics thx |
Hmmmm...B.I Detained takes this battle. e.coli, u had sum really played out punches man, like every battle u see here, sumbody is talking about sex, u gotta b more original than that, like espically since u are a vet, I'd expect sumthin more original man. Now with that said, I award B.I for punchlines, his hit harder and were more original.
Structure i award to e.coli, I really like that, how u clearly identify when the punches are striking, I don't see that too often and it works really well. Multies are awarded to B.I, he did have many more and his verse flowed a lot better than e.coli's in my eyes (barely tho) Personals are also awarded to B.I, his were much better and struck much harder. Plus, he had more Not a complete merking but the W does to go B.I here Vote- B.I Detained Hit me up with honest votes with the battles in my sig plz. thx. |
thanks for the breakdown cuz
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Opening: BI
Punches: e.coli Personals: BI Vocab: tie Flow: e.coli Structure: BI Closer: e coli enjoyment:e.coli Vote: e.coli e.coli alot harder than i thought he would his record shitty but he still got this. B.I u could have but a lil more effort in ur punches.But ya'll both need to elevate a lil in the flow cause some ur shit didnt flow at all |
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close shit man,
flow-tie punches-b.i opener-tie closer-e.coli structure-b.i overall-b.i but very close shit, plz plz hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...233#post1008233 ...thx............pz |
e.coli check ya pm's dawg......1
breakdown- flow-e punches-tie structure-b.i metas-b.i creativity-e overall-e no hate jus honest vote...feelin ya flow there e.coli n both ad gud creativity....e jus took it 4 me...pz cud ya hit up my battle wiv rule in my sig wiv an honest vote...thanx! |
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