"Smokey Pillows"
 

Its the curse of the rebound girl. The characteristics of a weak relationship exposed for what it is. This is my attempt at convincing myself I really do like my new girl.

Produced by Shadowville Productions.

"Smokey Pillows"

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first i noticed your too lound and not mixed into the beat enough your on top of it.....i can still tell your reading a bit, your not sayin it like you feel it, your sayin it like your suposed to.....the hook was mixed real week, n i dont like it that much....its like meh....the beat is a lil poppy for a song with this subject....its ight...couldnt listen to it more then once tho....get ya quality up a lil, n learn to say things like you mean em....

rtf on stalker

DUDE!...Imma smack you when I see you! You came on soooo loud I jumped...totally took me by surprise


vocals are mixed waaay too loud...


I like the sound of the hook tho...it was delivered/flowed well


I think with some polish, u cud sound hot.



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