how i do
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4762224

this is my second time usin a sound gate... it got some of the breaths, but some are still present. i had it set at -23.0...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3122931
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3122929

mixtapes called robbin the game... all on industry beats... get it?... robbin the game... i dunno, soundclicks been gay recently an i need to get some shit done.

ill rtf.

listening

o its this beat!...yeah nice!


ewwwwwwwwwwwww@ intro...lol


i like the way u come in..and i'm feeling your vocals..they are well done..def better than mine!

ummm...i think i cud count how many times you took a breathe...

your flow is steady and i like it so far..lyrics are the usuals but yeah nice bars in it...


err...no complains!...just a nice and decently recorded track here!...cool

thx = ). yah im still workin on fixin them breaths.

thx again for the feed = )

THIS IS HOW WE DO..........

lol @ burpin in the intro.... slap you in the face with my cock in hand ?? LMAO....

sound sorta like DZK on this joint.... voice wise...

i see what your talkin bout the Breath control..... its cuz you spit your verses straight through.... do you smoke??? Cuz i do.... and thats why my breath Control is off... lol.... But... if you punch in cleanly that'll minimize the gaspin in the track... or runn a good Noise Redux.... and shit ... but other than that homie.... this track was dope sauce for the Flow alone.... nahmean???

Aye Man... Lets talk some shop home boi.... Hit me wit a PM....

COLLAB.... w/e


OYD


Bronsky on the RTF

iite thx for the feed man, yah i use to smoke, but my breath control has got so bad i stopped. im tryina build a lil bit of lung strength back lol...

but yah ill get at u bout a collab. thx for the feed. = )

flow wuz nice.........swagga wuz nice on this shit too.......but yea bout the breath control this is what i do on Cool Edit Pro.......highlight the breath and go to amplify and click "-15" db for that little gasp of air and then repeat process.....but yea hope that helps...

pz

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this beat is coo but i dont think ya voice fits it....i dont know why u wuld wanna get rid of ur breaths without em it sounds un natural if u wanna get rid of them work on breath control swagger is ight flow sounds ight kinda says the same wish u swithced it a lil more over all this was ight gud job man .....

yea like ecko said voice is a lil high for the beat, breath control hurts you alot, try rappin with more from the stmouch, and with more cockyness...it helps with the breaths sounding more natural....

im 16 fellaz... my voice is deep when i talk, but when im rappin as loud as i do its not quite as deep. sry if thats really that big of a problem...

like i said, breath control is from my old smoking habit. i have no lung power.

Playing...
he this beats allwasy been nice. Wtf at you tryna be the beat..... wtf @ the burp.... Word @ the breaths sound exactly like mine.
I tend to go through and -10 Amp them all. boring as fuck and gets fucking annoying, but makes your track a shit load better.

yah, thats what a noise gate does, it lowers the breath without havin to go through it, i just havent used it enough yet to make it work.

thx for the feed tho cuz. = )

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beat is well known

ur flow is good...but the delivery is a tad monotonous


good how you take quick breaths...u do fast flows as well?


not bad bro


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Yea flow is hot man, I used to bump the normal track until I flipped styles. but yea delivery is pretty coo. I thought you did a good job on this ebat, honestly I'd rather bump this one then games and 50's version. overall the tracks pretty hot you layed out some nice lyrics and kept it solid through out the track. dope shit man

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...670#post3123670