RG bonus round thang, werd
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=208261

"RG - song bout my legal guardian Ovie"

werd, i made it about my legal guardian Ovie. wen he's on it, he wuz gone so i had 2 git him on ova tha phone, n lol, it sounds like he readin it off paper, but he didnt have a beat or nuthin n im pretty sho he wuz high, sooo, check that shit!

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...637#post2552637
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215540

werd

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didnt mean 2 post in here, shyt, werd

lol yea he sounds like he was reading it off the paper at least he didnt say stupid shit like my mom lol : /
flow was pretty much on point throughout emotion could have been better but cool track

lmao, wtf is up with using this beat, lol. Oh man, this better not blow...

ahahah damn son, you sound like this old-scool one hit blunder rapper Snagle Puss. And damn son, pull back from the mic. The lyrics are tight as hell but the quality blows the big one. LMAO @ garbage can. Your flow gets fucked up sometimes man, too many sylables, like one or two at the start in some spots.

AHAHAHA @ jackin dude's mom as a sample, but no son. You get disqualified. Why? Because you used a voice emulator and put the mic up to the speaker. I'm not gonna tell you how I know. Did someone rat? Is A smart enough to figure it out or hear it? I dunno. But you're still DQ'd.

wait wait wait, hold up, wut do u mean by that? u think ovie iz me? i swear on my fucking life it iznt. i will try and git u proof if i can. i dunno how will tho, but that iz not me at all. we're not even tha same race or nuthin, he's black. wut i did wuz, i use a hedset mic, i took of tha little foam thingy, n used elastics so itd stay on tha speaker part of tha phone. n then i went n talked 2 him on tha utha phone. that IZ wut ur talkin about right? i have ni voice emulators or nuthin like that, seriously. u have no proof of it. now ijust gotta try n figure out how ima proove it 2 u. hmmmmmm, werd

^^pfftt. son, I HIGHLY doubt it as it is, but to prove it, you'd need to get this man on the horn acapella and ask him to say "cool kol-b once gave me a blowjob with 4 skittles and a handfull of mayonaise." "word".

ROFL, u want him acapella? like, i can call him 2marow prolly n u can hear us both talkin. he's gonna b gone fo a lil wile tho, n he duzznt have a comp. hmmm, ayo, i have a bunch of hiz songs, if u want, i can make a SC wif them on it n u can listen 2 them. he had pritty bad quality cuz he made them on tha sound recorder thingy, no cool edit or nuthin. but i can do that right now if u want, holla back, werd

fuck dat. Mayonaise.

LMAO, nah, I'm buggin son, but yeah, you'd need an acapella of him just talkin.

lmao. hmmmm, hol up, i got tha intro 2 a cd he made a wile ago, its almost acapella, werd

tha best i can git right now iz him on tha phone. excpt fo that shit i sed in tha above post. i dunno if he can git 2 a comp n use hedphones az a mic or wut, i'll have 2 call him 2marow, werd

ayo, check my SC, i put hiz intro thingy on it. thas tha best i can git u fo now, werd

aight peepin now

Production:Problay the hottest beat i ever heard the i got 5 on it beat:10/10
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Flow:Ya flow was aight.....wasn't the best but u rode the beat good:7/10
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Pressense:ya pressense was good you kinda went in and out on the mic i was kinda like what?? fix that up and it'd be better:7.5/10
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Emotion:You had aight emotion......you shoulda added a lil more in some of the words and it'da been better:6.5/10
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Lyrics:lyrics were deep i was feelin um....basic but good:7/10
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Overall: good track for the rap game keep it up man...:6.8/10

stay up and keep droppin um solid
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thanks fo tha feed mayn ^^ werd

lmao

fuck ovie aka robo-cop.