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Explizzle content: Rap game demo
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Listenin...lol at the mad dog.. bit....you come in pretty good..."infront of ure cd" lol thas dope...flow is dope...delivery is nice...likin the fact youre back...lyrically this track is nice...but flow outshines real good...like it..beat is nice...
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ur vocals were clear..but they had a touch too much reverb on them for my tastes
this beat is so blah...heard it too much ur flow is good..def. on beat...that UK accent again, geesh...well, you do your thing ur delivery is not bad for what it is...you could at least add some more emotion/variation to your voice Lyrics...cudn't decipher all of what u said...but they seemed consistent PS...I'm not gonna say nothin bout u bein able to drop for this tourney but forfeiting in my tourney..NOPE...not gonna say anything about that...haaa pretty decent drop though 1 |
cheers for the feed.. lol its morning here i jus got up n i got work in bout an hour or 2.. n the prizes are better in this... but if i had more time i deffo wouldav showed for rv idol
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so ur doing this for the prizes?...makes sense considering it's billed as a PRIZE tourney... Rv Rap Idol is completely different...about elevation...hence the different challeneges and tutorials included in the assignments I don't think you understood what you signed up for. ne way I'm out. |
inabit..........
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ye lol @ the Mad Dog beat...seeing as i pulled YOU up on the amount my name is mentioned out ya mouth...
but to the actual track i love this beat...i don't care if it's played or not...it's still a hot beat...and i think you did quite well on it...flow was good...shoulda switched flow quality was cool...in places ya bars were 1 word too many or too little...but ya delivery made up for that...lyrically was good...should ended wit an outro...verse jus stopped lol...but ye it was an aight track...keep droppin...:thumbup: |
cheers for the feed.... no need for an intro lol its just to get cleared n shit
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ye but still...it's aight to close on a winner ya feel me?
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yeh i get what ya sayin.....
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lol never really liked this beat, this was like the first beat i downloaded when i had my comp, dope flow man, nice its like kinda an introduction seriously lol, pretty dope man, finish that fucking song called phatal thing man its like a hit where i live, tere all waiting for a second verse damn lol, mmm i aint feelin the way the song finish cuz its like your spittin then you stop then the beat stop, atleas an outro talkin you know what i meen lol, anyway good track, not your best but still dope, peace man
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ill do the track when i get time lol.... sometime next month ;)
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