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GKillaz05 12-30-04 10:52 PM

Parallel vs GKillaz05
 
Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Dont Take To Long :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 12-31-04 at 10:52 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

System 12-30-04 10:52 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 10:52 PM.

GKillaz05 12-30-04 11:11 PM

You like to twist your shit up and call it wordplay...
But the voters are like "What The Fuck He Just Say?"...
Must be gay changin names is like changin your sex....
Internet transvestite who has some really poor text...
But do what you do best even if that is being whack...
My punches landin' is the only way you seein black...
So start leaning back until you fall over on the ground...
Throwin' punches over your head like a baseball mound...
Say your on top on your game and your gettin better yet...
Paralell's fallin' off just like the ashes from my cigerette...
Winnin streak about to slope down like under a stairwell...
How can a fake MC wit a mic every claim to be parallel...

System 12-31-04 02:04 AM

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 02:04 AM.

Parallel 01-01-05 06:21 PM

dont vote if you dont understand my wordplay and punchlines...cuz most of rv is wack...


Gkillaz do-you-love to hit hard ones in-the-back-ground
Hittin-it-to-hard do you enjoy whores from-da-front-down
Shit gets me grossed out to hear-nasty-shit like that, its garbage
Don’t ever throw it in my face the sounds-sick like cabbage
Fuck a 16 year old I don’t care how many-years-older you are
I’ll still take my wordplay at best cuz I don’t-get-any-younger
We both-might be from Canada but you still-have problems
Take a second realize-the-truth ur messed up even to ur friends
Don’t bother telling me I know-the-future like im a hypnotist
Just don’t bother if you don’t understand-the-truth on a list

Parallel 01-01-05 08:18 PM

well lets get some votes........................uppin

GKillaz05 01-01-05 11:37 PM

yo.. UPPIN, lets get votes peoples!!...

GKillaz05 01-02-05 04:12 PM

........./\.............uppin............../\................

Speats 01-02-05 04:21 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

good battle both of you two,but i prefere GKillaz verse,you had imagination
Struture:GKillaz(just a lil bit more)
Humour:GKillaz
WordPlay:Parallel
Punch's:I prefered GKillaz but almost a tie

best line from GKillaz:
You like to twist your shit up and call it wordplay...
But the voters are like "What The Fuck He Just Say?"...
that was funny lol

from Parallel:
Don’t bother telling me I know-the-future like im a hypnotist
Just don’t bother if you don’t understand-the-truth on a list
The line was iight,cool

Voted For : GKillaz

Parallel 01-02-05 04:56 PM

you told me you didnt know wordplay....why would you say i got wordplay....lmao...and the line you said you liked for me actually was shit...your not suspsto talk about yourself for a punch...lmao.....G im d/qing that no hate x-spitty but you obviously dont understand anything...

Speats 01-02-05 04:58 PM

now i know what it is,people explained me it better

Speats 01-02-05 04:59 PM

ive notice that you have something to say each time someone votes against you,i now kno what wordplay are cuz some other peep explained it to me but better...no hate but i do understand

GKillaz05 01-02-05 06:02 PM

yo man, stop cryin.. DQ it I dont care, he seems to understand though because I thought that was one of your better lines. but w/e Uppin

GKillaz05 01-02-05 11:05 PM

Uppin.......................

Dex 01-02-05 11:33 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Firstly Parallel wen you start by saying "cuz most of rv is wack...", It doesnt usually get you off on the right foot. But i think you only did this as an excuse cos you knew you were about to get beat.

open: GKillaz:"You like to twist your shit up and call it wordplay...
But the voters are like "What The Fuck He Just Say?"..." -I couldnt have put it better myself. The funniset thing is that wen you read Parallel's opener, you are thinkg, "what the fuck he just say?" cos he thinking too much bout wordplay, Gkillaz05 knows his opponent.

close:G:"Winnin streak about to slope down like under a stairwell...
How can a fake MC wit a mic every claim to be parallel..." -This was good. He found a rhyme for parallel, (which is nice) and ended well. Parallel.. no

Parellel's best bar:"Shit gets me grossed out to hear-nasty-shit like that, its garbage
Don’t ever throw it in my face the sounds-sick like cabbage" -This was really as good as it got. Good playing with sickness but it was still only above average.

GKillaz05's best bar:"Say your on top on your game and your gettin better yet...
Paralell's fallin' off just like the ashes from my cigerette..." I liked this prob the most. Hard to say cos it was a real good verse and i think you should know that.

It was helped that Parellel really posted whack but Gkillaz05 took this cos his punches were so much better and personal while P's just wasnt hitting and i wasnt feeling his verse at all.


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