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Revoke vs. Mark Greyson vs. T West
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 12 line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
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12 lines..? in a 3 way..? foreal..? oh well...
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T-west...your just pointing out the first Original Member to get beat this is a DISS kid, suppose it was a topical the topic? your defeat A vet from old RB, on relaunched your not gaining any recognition a trip to the 80's must be where you snatched your verse for this competition* your checkin sums up what your drops and your picture looks like I dont see you droppin hard cuz like 0 calorie yougurt your known to drop light Marky Mark Your just a nobody here look at your user title and keep it straight Avalon,from Original Consider me the merk Squad cuz your just fresh bait its kinda sad to see an alias with a name as wack as Mark Greyson 15-11 is your record on Original, kinda like the odds your now facing no one gives a fuck what you say so you put your name in your sig for attention and the fact that Geneisis came before, but like the latest model DC is better is what you forgot to mention..... * trip to the 80's is a title of a song in his Soundclick |
Mark Greyson...
Comin' with wore out concepts that are already done... Mark Greyson entered this battle wearin' Foremans Gloves! think bitin' trash lines makes you lyrically hardest? Hell No...I just find it sad to hear that you eat garbage! Forget your weak ass disses that've already been mentioned... Genesis is just the time from where your punches were invented! Revoke... Forcin' out punchlines...i'm suprised you don't choke... Your shit!...seems like your skill must of been revoked! No pay back for you...can't wage war on me... Since your battlin' tactics suffer from Poverty!* We all see you losin'...check predictions ppl write... and I'm leadin you "Right To This Picture" like Rhetorical Insights! *I beat him in a topical battle...and the topic was poverty... |
I guess Mark no-showed...so how do we judge this now? I guess ppl tell us how well me dissed mark...and how well we dissed eachother...and they draw a conclusion
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Ima judging his verse against you & your against his.....
T-west...your just pointing out the first Original Member to get beat this is a DISS kid, suppose it was a topical the topic? your defeat Should of used that concept in a diff way so I wasnt feelin this much. A vet from old RB, on relaunched your not gaining any recognition a trip to the 80's must be where you snatched your verse for this competition* thats a played line.....sayin he used stuff from 80's 90's etc so this werent good. your checkin sums up what your drops and your picture looks like I dont see you droppin hard cuz like 0 calorie yougurt your known to drop light I liked both of this lines.....u flipped that gay way he checked in & you had the wordplay on the 2nd line..if only ur other lines were as good as this. Forcin' out punchlines...i'm suprised you don't choke... Your shit!...seems like your skill must of been revoked! Yeh flipped his name.....cudda done it better but it was a decent opener. No pay back for you...can't wage war on me... Since your battlin' tactics suffer from Poverty!* personal & also ur dissin him in another way sayin his tactics are starved which was decent. We all see you losin'...check predictions ppl write... and I'm leadin you "Right To This Picture" like Rhetorical Insights! dont quotate its gay & newbish. But this was decent wordplay & a good closer....personal aswell on the top line. this was a decent battle........small obviously..... Ill chekt also how both of u dissed Av & T West again came stronger. Your lucky that Av didnt show coz he wudda of beaten ur verses with ease. But....... today was T wests lucky day. |
^lmao dam straight...god bless av.
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Forcin' out punchlines...i'm suprised you don't choke...
Your shit!...seems like your skill must of been revoked! 7/10 No pay back for you...can't wage war on me... Since your battlin' tactics suffer from Poverty!* 7/10 We all see you losin'...check predictions ppl write... and I'm leadin you "Right To This Picture" like Rhetorical Insights! 8/10 21/30 T-west...your just pointing out the first Original Member to get beat this is a DISS kid, suppose it was a topical the topic? your defeat 7/10 A vet from old RB, on relaunched your not gaining any recognition a trip to the 80's must be where you snatched your verse for this competition* 8/10 your checkin sums up what your drops and your picture looks like I dont see you droppin hard cuz like 0 calorie yougurt your known to drop light 8/10 22/30 v/revoke |
seeings how mark didnt show up he loses
revok i give this battle to you becuase i felt that your verse was slightly better then T Wests.....your punches hit slightlyt harder then his and although your structures was the same and shit i felt tht your flow was better then his......T you need to elevate a little bit your shit was good but nothing to great.......pc v/Revok |
revok..
bro ur punches were hitting kinda weak and shit flow was there after al it was only 6 lines... but u lacked strong punches and personals... overall 7.3/10 t-west your punches hit harder and better than his in my oppinion you guys ahd about even flow where he lacked hard hittin personals you upstaged him and hit harder..my vote t-west 7.6/10 v/twest |
yea, this was pretty close.
T-West, you had some decent punches. But none of yo punches realyl hit all that hard. But they were aiight. Yo flow was pretty good. But it went off in a few spots. Overall, pretty decent verse. Revoke, you had some hot punches here. You had some nice ones that hit pretty hard. They were pretty good. Yo flow was also pretty good too. Nice shit. Overall, a pretty nice verse. v/Revoke. no hate |
My fault... I've been in ATL since Thursday and just had shit to do...
West I'd have merked you... Revoke... you'd have been merked also... OH well... West for the win... why you ask..? Revoke... flow was off... not even remotely on... the verses isn't smooth... his "punchlines" were amateurish... West... flow was better... verse wasn't that smooth... but atleast his punches were good... |
yo this battle was close both had some good personals on each other. T West took this with harder personals. Closer was nice as well as the personal about the topical defeat. close but T west edges this one.
vote-T west |
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