Black Dragon - Quick Reaction
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215224
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215320
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tha beat is by my homeboi/producer Mercilus.........www.soundclick.com/joshuakarlovositis........

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3133730
^^Click Hi-Fi
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Quick Reaction (Hi-Fi)

'preciate any feedback.................

pz

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The beat starts off pretty cool. I think I got the same strings in GB if I'm not mistaken. Your vocals need to turn up a slight bit like 2 dB's. The flow sounded on but your mic is stripping a lot of the body out of your voice. I'd pump this in my car if the quality was on point. The hook's pretty good and actually sounds like a hook, not just more rhymes. There's slight places where the flow hiccups, but it's over-all written to the beat no doubt. The only thing I coulda asked for (aside from the quality) is that the flow in the last verse was different form the two prior ones. Thadaboudit. Peace.

'preciate da feedback man.......bout the strings it wuz sampled from Paganini's 5th and 24th Caprices....all violins at different octaves........

pz

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I actually liked the beat


flow is choppy


lyrics are str8 though


not great/not bad = pretty decent dawg

keep droppin


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'preciate da feedback...........i took off the version yall responded to and fixed my problems...........so uppin......................

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beat starts off weird, but it gits nice

flow iz nice

lyircs r aight

chorus iz dope

yeah mayn im likin this shit.

rtf pleeze!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548

werd

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its not on the page no more cant dropp feed

give me the direct link too ur soundclick so i can hear

aight peepin now

production: the production is pretty good i like the intro wit the violins it gets cool..overall this beat aint too bad:8/10

Flow:your flow is real nice...your rode the beat real man.....:7/10

Pressense:your pressense is str8 not too shabby...keep it comin:7/10

Emotion:your emotion stayed the same should had more change ups:7/10

Quality:quality was real bad..i wasn't feelin it...:five/10

Lyrics:your lyrics were coool fit beat real well:8/10

Overall:This wasn't too bad of a song man..keep um coming:7/10

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'preciate da feedback homie............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^