VIvID vs SKILLDVERSE
 

Battle Rules:
10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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please dont vote if u dont understand the wordplay or punches by either mc's...... honest votes appreciated

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-04-04 at 06:01 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 03:04 PM.

SKILLDVERSE has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 03:27 PM.

k...check it

Ur raps R a joke but trust me they aint that funny/ im straight sick like my nose is runny/
im flippin,kickin, rippin this foe 2 shreads/ im on a different level then ya like tha po's 2 tha feds/
have ya taken ya meds, cause ya lyrics are slow/ Dj Screw aint in this biznitch so whuts goin on with u bro/
Ur flow ur rhyme it dont even make sense/ im makin dollars, is this hurtin? dont get all tense/
ur shakin ur sweatin like a kid with a fever/ Im doin more damage to this cat then a bloody meat cleaver/
Sorry i had 2 murder this kid slipped and killed with my verse/ hurry call tha medics, tha doc!.......shit call a hearse.

thanks 4 ne votes

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Voted For: VIvID

Skilld came ass with self glorification. . .a fucked up structure, and played punchlines. Do something about all that filler son, shit was super gay. Good thing you actually used punches.

Vivid won this basically with his structure only, and he had stronger punches than Skilld. Not the freshest punches, but they were enough to win.

v/ Vivid

Voted For: SKILLDVERSE

open: Ur raps R a joke but trust me they aint that funny/ im straight sick like my nose is runny/ -the winning opening by far. Sorry vivid, your was real weak.
close: Vivid's electrician line was good, but skilldiverse had me, good line!
personals: didnt find it the most personal battle but "have ya taken ya meds, cause ya lyrics are slow/ Dj Screw aint in this biznitch so whuts goin on with u bro/" -this was heavy!
punches: both had good selection but skilldiverse had me in bits more often!
"Ima son skill make sure his ass really gets canned
Have white boy thinkn he half blk the way he so tanned" -This was vivid'd best, good i thought but that was it. Sorry bro.

win: Skilldiverse took this one easily i think. -Unlucky vivid, it just wasnt your battle.

Any more votes???????????????????any one?????????
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uppin

been open for weeks c;mon

honest broke down votes needed!

Yes This Has Been Open Fo Weeks Please People Vote.

Voted For: VIvID

damn...neither verse was very creative, or had any decent punches...both flowed alright, but you both need to really up your battling skillz...however, Im gonna give this to VIvID for that "Have white boy thinking he half blk the way he get tanned" line...best line out of both verses, but still was not that great...both verses need to elevate...1

Voted For: VIvID

yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA

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Voted For: SKILLDVERSE

I think skill got this bitch just because he creativity and wordplay were sick right off the bat he took it from the otha guy and even he closed off this battle wit a bang props to vivid not to bad bro just this one wasnt u