MY STATUS...SPEATS ON THE BEAT>>>DOPENESS MUST HEAR
 

yo thi sis for speats mixtape yo, i couldnt think of what to make for this beat so i just put together a lil somehting, didnt take much time on this wrote the vwerses in like 5 minutes and the chorus was done in a few minutes

but i left feedback on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209218
lady fiya and her hot shit, word, fastes spit ive heard in a while
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209726
gbless and his lil mexican crew, i think, but he got mad potiential

word






my song is called MY STATUS

http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce

Just listened to it

Flow is on and off at times. Kinda weird to me. For the most part you stayed on. Your emotion wasn't great but wasn't bad. I think it was right in the middle. It sorta seemed like you was reading it. Not too much, but it kinda sounded a little boring. Your quality was pretty good. But sometimes it sounded like you were loud and then soft and then loud and then soft. I'm definitely not feelin the chorus. It kinda sucks. I think it just makes the song wack. Other than that, it was a decent track. I would give it a
5.5-6/10

its just a rough draft, so word for the opinion, i did this real fast, i tried to make the chorus real quick and easy so that i didint have to take much time becuase all i had was 45 mins to record today and i had to write so i recorded, mixed, and all that shit in like 10 minutes, just a rough draft,,,,,good shit tho, i got like 3 other songs that i did yesterday, word they are a lil better but once again they are rough drafts, i will ahve those up tommororw night, im out peace

soundclick is down:(:(:(

oh it works, seriously i like this song, the chorus is weird seriously, i like that kinda scratch, nice verse, u took my favorite beat, imma put this on my mixtape for sure man
good drop

I can tell you rushed this... it's not real, real bad since it's a draft. I want to hear the final version before I leave feed. Your flow is pretty decent some parts you rush in the middle of your bars. And sometimes it falls off. The chorus I actually like if it was slowed down a little more for the beat. I won't give it a rating because I really think this will sound sooo much better when you take your time with it and produce the final version..

word i was not realy focused on the mixing on this track i was just tryna get the mojority of it done so you guys can give me feed, but yo im gonna re- do this but not for a few days becuase i got hella home work due in a 2 days then after that im going to L.A for a few more days

so i should have it all done in a week , and the lyrics should be alot better

^word, I'll be looking out for it, mos def.. I got tracks I need to finish myself so I know what that's like, being busy with other things..

yea upping this for people to hear some real dope shit from speats and myself

uppin........................

wow the scratchin was wack...no offense, but it didnt sound real...the flow of the chorus seems off....

verse comes in...flow was on and off like blay said...delivery is aight....lyrics is aight...Im not feelin the chorus at all, the scratchin doesnt go to the melody at all...

i did the straching my self with my voice, lol word, im gonna have my borther add scraching becuase he got tables

werd your brother should post in turntablism forum :thumbup: and what kind of decks does he got....and tell him to send me his vynil lol

he got 2 techniks, not sur eont he spellling, man my whole family got tables and im the only one with a mic, word.... and he dont get online he is too much into fucking girls and "gang banging" and drinking,
me i got a girl firend so my life pretty much sucks, lolo

i like the beat nice choice btw
the hook was ugh...srz but not really feeling it...and even if u didnt put time on this..i must say it was nice...as for the lyrics....cool...yeah really cool including flow and so on..:thumbup: