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Young Fear 08-24-07 11:16 AM

Young Fear vs Technique
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-27-07 at 11:16 AM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.

System 08-24-07 11:16 AM

Young Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-07 11:16 AM.

System 08-25-07 07:39 PM

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-07 07:39 PM.

technique 08-25-07 08:03 PM

U shouldnt be called young fear cuz im the one thats fearing u
Dont bohter listening to your rhymes cuz nobodys hearing you
Your on a losing path just quit while your head
cuz i'll have ur stickin ass shot off with a bullet to u dead
mutha fucker techniques got skills to have ur ass rotted
You aint gonna step on me specially to no cock head
im well respected ur rejected i leave you disrespected
and infected like you got aids that aint been detected
young fear stands for big queer why are you here
after you read one line ur ass will be in tears
cuz i rip herbs like u each year lol You aint special
no you have any potentual which is fucking essential
if you wanna make it but your afraid of expressing
your innerself ur a fag so you never will be impressing
dressing up like a clown fits you hmm best of the best
how could u when ur the best at shootin ya load on dads chest
U whole style i detest and i'll eat it and digest U big knob face
U can hop into space cuz ur scared of me givn u the blood taste
surely u must have somet better to do den post ur shitty verse
yea u go prey to jesus in church and snatch money from mums purse
faggots an arsehole i mean u only have look at his avatar
that matches his own hair thinks he's come kinda star
I aint got much time for you cuz i like to ignore you
surely u must have load'sa time for ur dad to explore you
i whore u daily you must not be liking wot im doing
but it's me the croud are chearing and it's u for booing

Young Fear 08-28-07 08:37 AM

Ill have your bitch saying get em daddy
Got em mami/
This kids technique is sloppy/
Wordplay all fucked up and plus your flow is choppy/
The only beat you'll catch is with some vaseline/
Catch beef and get jumped on just like a trampoline/
My words attack your dreams
These slugs impact your splean/
You the horoscopes in the back(useless)
Im the whole magazine/
these kids dont like you cause your style is vegetated/
When vets read your verse theyll think I elevated/
In a way I did
and doggy you did too/
I went up, you down, like your wife on your crew/

Young Fear 08-30-07 08:52 AM

Come on niggas. Uppin this shit. need votes dont wanna keep this going for long.

Young Fear 09-06-07 12:52 PM

Damn its been like a week and there hasnt even been one vote.

Cola 09-26-07 09:55 AM

Voted For: Technique

holy shit, you both really really really really really suck ass....and i will not vote on either of this crap.............................................. ................................................

SKAAL 09-26-07 12:12 PM

Voted For: Young Fear

this was easy at first i thought fear was gonna flop from the start of the verse but you really picked it up and had some effective punches and the endin was classic i liked it

technique your verse was ok not bad but you had too much filler you should've made it shorter and harder no homo

vote: youngfear

lk63 09-28-07 06:44 AM

Voted For: Young Fear

Tech

U shouldnt be called young fear cuz im the one thats fearing u
Dont bohter listening to your rhymes cuz nobodys hearing you
No no no, what is this suppose to be……FILLER

Your on a losing path just quit while your head
cuz i'll have ur stickin ass shot off with a bullet to u dead
To You Dead????? Ahhhh think

mutha fucker techniques got skills to have ur ass rotted
You aint gonna step on me specially to no cock head
doesn’t even rhyme and it means nothing

im well respected ur rejected i leave you disrespected
and infected like you got aids that aint been detected
and infected….are You gonna giv him HIV….that’s what it says

young fear stands for big queer why are you here
after you read one line ur ass will be in tears
WHAT ARE YOU DOING

cuz i rip herbs like u each year lol You aint special
no you have any potentual which is fucking essential
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAME

if you wanna make it but your afraid of expressing
your innerself ur a fag so you never will be impressing
BORING

dressing up like a clown fits you hmm best of the best
how could u when ur the best at shootin ya load on dads chest
WHAT?

U whole style i detest and i'll eat it and digest U big knob face
U can hop into space cuz ur scared of me givn u the blood taste
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME

surely u must have somet better to do den post ur shitty verse
yea u go prey to jesus in church and snatch money from mums purse
HUH!!!!!!!

faggots an arsehole i mean u only have look at his avatar
that matches his own hair thinks he's come kinda star
NOOOOPE

I aint got much time for you cuz i like to ignore you
surely u must have load'sa time for ur dad to explore you
This is actually pretty good…………..diamond in the dirt

i whore u daily you must not be liking wot im doing
but it's me the croud are chearing and it's u for booing
ok I heard enough

copy this to a page…then copy a verse from an mc, an mc EVERYONE LIKES
not u, everybody else likes…then compare, find out why your verse SUCKS
the only reason I summed up ya verse is so u can see what kind of things, u, should NEVER ever attempt again.

Young Fear

You the horoscopes in the back(useless)
Im the whole magazine/
these kids dont like you cause your style is vegetated/
When vets read your verse theyll think I elevated/
In a way I did
and doggy you did too/
I went up, you down, like your wife on your crew/
Their we go the reason I vote for u

Dude you need to elevate

Vote Young Fear

C-Bo 10-04-07 02:45 AM

Voted For: Technique

Punches: Tek
Creativity: Tek
Wordplay: Tek
Flow: Tek
Personals: Tek

Explanation: Was this even a real battle?...lol...Tek destroyed this kid...Better puches, more creativity, and overall a better verse...YF, your verse was like a nursery rhyme...u need alot of practice

Vote: Tek

KM 10-04-07 05:33 AM

Voted For: Young Fear

ehhhh for a battle i didn't like both verses but yall did all right......if i was to vote id have to say young fear....smoother read and just came at it better......had some multis in it which stood out to me....tech you were trying to come up with something personnel but it was weak and didn't come out right....and the way u diss is playyyed i was dissing like that when i was a kid...u gotta elevate and be more original....you gotta work on your punches...

~1~

KM 10-04-07 05:35 AM

my bad i was suppose to put this under feedback...pressed the wrong buttons lolz....~1~

Godz Child 03-26-08 12:34 PM

Voted For: Technique

you win cuz i like you verse more because urs had more punches

Da Problem Child 03-26-08 01:42 PM

Voted For: Technique

u won this cuz his suck ass man i dont even no why this battle is still on the front lines


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