damaged1 vs Gods Son
 

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no hatin/ dr
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i'll spit first ...

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Damaged1's Too smalL HE can’t EVEN *SHOOT-HOOPS*/ HE tried GOING Out with-a-chick BUT SHE LEFT SAYIN “YA DICK IS SO SMALL IT CAN FIT IN to *FRUIT-LOOPS*
WE all WONDERING, WHO’S-THIS-GUY, IS It *A*MYSTERY?*/ HE MUST HAVE *BAD-HISTORY*, CUZ he ALL UP IN MA FACE whEn I SAY I -THINK-I-KNOW- AS if HE WAS *KISSING-ME*
CHiLDs TRynA *DEFEND-HIS-ERECTUM* CUZ I LYRCALY STICK MY FOOT UP HIS ASS AND *BEND-IT-LIKE-BECKHAM*/
I Leave ya *MIND-FRIED* & *RHYME-TIED* when ya *LINES-GRIND* like *SPASTICS*/ JuST LET MY *time-unwind* the Only *CRIME-DEFINED* used AGAINST YOU like *FAT-ASSES* in *GYMNASTICS*/
Are you kidding me with the name *Damaged1*?/ Son watch out,i shine like the *sun* no the numba 1 is gon' stick a fork in you cuz now ya *DONE*

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I spit plenty punches to pierce thru your brains with .speed. …
while dismantle your mantle with blazin rhymes until your neck drips with gasoline. …ok....could of been better
acceptin my callout? I got gats the size of you that can easily .snap you.. …
only way your catchin cases is when your fans throw yo demos back .at’chu. …ha ha....funny shit
I rip heavily thru fraud clowns when spittin too many bullets to .clap me. …
How are you god’s son ? when you only here cuase im your foster daddy. …
ha ha...again funny shit...nice personal
My raps style .drastic. leavin niggas buried and wrapped up in .plastic. …
Wit spit .taktikz. that’ll chop you up like .cabbage. and leave you turned over in .caskets. …ok...nice
Im rippin open your internal glands with quick punches and a .low kick. …
Your style is dead,dating a gurl wit no breasts is the only way you’ll get .no-tits. … (noticed)alright nice closer

you had some nice punches up in there.....overall nice drop just work
on using personals

7.0/10

Gods son
Damaged1's Too smalL HE can’t EVEN *SHOOT-HOOPS*/ HE tried GOING Out with-a-chick BUT SHE LEFT SAYIN “YA DICK IS SO SMALL IT CAN FIT IN to *FRUIT-LOOPS*..ha ha funny....but not really a punch
WE all WONDERING, WHO’S-THIS-GUY, IS It *A*MYSTERY?*/ HE MUST HAVE *BAD-HISTORY*, CUZ he ALL UP IN MA FACE whEn I SAY I -THINK-I-KNOW- AS if HE WAS *KISSING-ME*...ok....no punch
CHiLDs TRynA *DEFEND-HIS-ERECTUM* CUZ I LYRCALY STICK MY FOOT UP HIS ASS AND *BEND-IT-LIKE-BECKHAM*/
I Leave ya *MIND-FRIED* & *RHYME-TIED* when ya *LINES-GRIND* like *SPASTICS*/ JuST LET MY *time-unwind* the Only *CRIME-DEFINED* used AGAINST YOU like *FAT-ASSES* in *GYMNASTICS*/..ha ha...ok
Are you kidding me with the name *Damaged1*?/ Son watch out,i shine like the *sun* no the numba 1 is gon' stick a fork in you cuz now ya *DONE*
nice closer

you had some good punches in there...but some lines could of been better
again use personals.....personals are a straight diss to your opp. nice drop
but overall....6.5/10

vote-Damaged1

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damaged1 - hey u had sum syik punchez, flowd well.. and i enjoyd it all tha way..

godz son - had fewer punchez, didnt feel much.. didnt flo al da wayy...

i tynk both ov u'z shud work on ur personalz.. coz dat will get u 2 win...
both wer gud buh i preferd damaged1'z coz it wuz betta...

my vote: DAMAGED1. peace

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aiyo, that was hot but imma have to give it up to damage1, cause his punches were better...his flow was also better,

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hey who u sayin thanx 2???????? me???? lolz
u betta b.......... yo am jokin... lolz

damage: you had some good punches in there...you had the structure *since ur shit is so small*..and the flow was good...6/10

gods: first of all get rid of the ( * ) shit is annoyin...u had some ok punches they could of been harder..and the structure wasn't all that good...kinda chop'd up 'n' shit...(elevate more)...5/10

v/ damage

aight neither had flows i think they both came weak and damage i know u can do better than that but ima give it to damage he came weak but managed to win
v/damage

return da favor on verbal violence vrs.. nervez

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still uppin for votes dont sleep on this we need voters..please...