.:KAPITAL:. vs Batman
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-05 at 02:18 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

.:KAPITAL:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 02:19 PM.

Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 10:16 AM.

yo u about to feel my fuckin wrath
u gonna git shut out bitch do the damn math
i got u in a madd tight bind
my rymes wil make u go blinder than blind
u about as fruity a hi-c juice box
i say that cuz u were the one i seen suckin ur brothers cock
hey dont git me wrong dawg there aint no hate
i bet u could get ur brother to be ya damn date
i dont wanna git u mad cuz i dont wanna be attacked by a munchkin
ur to much of a pussy to handle the puches im throwin
yyea i might have 1 win and lost 3
but u 0-0 u cant see me
i way outta ur league bro u cant take this
every puch u throw is a direct miss
and we aint play a friendly game of battleship so u better be worried
after im done wit u nobody will no where your burried
i kno i need to elevate but i still got skillz
i fuck u up worse than u were poppin pillz
u fucked wit me and now im in the mode of attack
bitch u better be defensive and watch ur fuckin back

DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH YOUS IS WACKMAN WACKMAN WACKMAN......seriously fuck ya whack wordplay played punches n gay concepts......

aight lemme burn this shit up.....

You're here for an Instant.. then you're gone.. with grief
Cuz Kap'll rest ya case.. like putting ya folders to sleep
Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
Fuckin herb.. doesn't understand what I'm tryin to say
You're not heavyweight and never will be.. n that includes today
Bat couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
Fuck new kids to this rap.. starting shit with vets.. ya hands aren't good
I'll turn your ass so pink.. you'll have to move to Camrons hood

upp in for fuckin votes bitches lets not make this take forever to end

Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

lol...nive verse there closer was funny...and opner was tight....kap definitely had more punches that hit way harder and structure was better...its also helped on improving your flow...ur verse was clare..i mean i cud understand every line but batman's verse got me sayin ehhhhh? in some lines...for example


i got u in a madd tight bind
my rymes wil make u go blinder than blind

^^ say whaaaa?...blinder than blind :huh:

hey dont git me wrong dawg there aint no hate
i bet u could get ur brother to be ya damn date

^^ that was an aimless punch...made n sense..no hate tho

but i must say batman that ur closer was decent..

kapital had this shit goin mayne...be it in structure,flow,punches,metas and so on...his verse was much more entertainin than batmans...so with this he gets my vote...

plz drop and honest and well xplained vote in one of my battles thanx

This was feedback posted for .:KAPITAL:.
 

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Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

yo kapital winz diz battl hiz verse wuz much doper he had errythang hiz verse had dem nice punchez but diz udda guy had ok verse juz wuznt dat dope alot ov rhymez wuz boring and fillerz u kno i tink dat kapital won eaze

This was feedback posted for .:KAPITAL:.
 

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batman get in the crew thread.........................

Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

Yo batman Im not gonna breakdown ures cos its basicly jus written bullshit, Im sorry, work on it, structure youre lines,
all of that, complexity sucks....

Ok Kaps lets go

You're here for an Instant.. then you're gone.. with grief
Cuz Kap'll rest ya case.. like putting ya folders to sleep
^^^
Iite opener, cud have been better, set up well

Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
^^^
Lol this was a good one here, funny punch

Fuckin herb.. doesn't understand what I'm tryin to say
You're not heavyweight and never will be.. n that includes today
^^^
Ok im not feelin this, too basic...ya feel me, work on ure structure, u settin up aiite

Bat couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
^^^
This shit is again pretty childish but set up aiite,

Fuck new kids to this rap.. starting shit with vets.. ya hands aren't good
I'll turn your ass so pink.. you'll have to move to Camrons hood
^^^
Lol ok this was a good closer,

A lil advice lil man, ure shits too basic, adopt a style, complex it more, go for the kill, make punches to do with him, hes called batman rite? so play on that same with u bat, but it goes for u

Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

Holy Crap.

KAPITAL - your verse was makin me laugh. you had some nice punches and wordplay there. the sitting position line was pretty good. the only thing i woulda liked to see are some personals. cause that makes it better. your kill line was pretty good as well...8/10


Batman - wow. and thats not a good wow. you need to work on making some punches. you had some really lame lines. work on creativity using wordplay and personals. there are tutorials at the bottom of the RV page to help you with this. overall i wasnt feeling your verse. sorry man. 1/10


KAPITAL wins

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This was feedback posted for .:KAPITAL:.
 

batman=needs more elevation.........checkin pollz fam