Young Savage Vs. Blak Woods
 

10-16 lines
simple rules
due 20 min afta check in


check check it

aight check i'm in here...look for the spit in 20 min

Ok...you just another victim no hard feelings....

Start off slow...

A 20 minute time limit can't stop the flow, i'm a show stopper, you just "Stop The Show"/
You the type of kat to freeze up like "Water" i'll put you in my "Time Piece"(Watch) see it "Glow"/
This guy sucks so bad he wants to "Kiss Me" just so we can "Change Spits"/
Mixed "Potassium" and "Guns" together and feed u "Banana Clips"/
Rhyme in suspension "Ima Kill You Witness" my "Key-Phrase"/
Ill have ya “Heart” Pumpin “Less Beats” then a “Armless D.J.”/

*Switch Up The Flow; Turn Up The Heat*

"Brush" The "Fuss" Off Like "Dust", Then "Adjust” Muh “Clutch" To ''Crush-Blak'' Wit Muh ''Flush-Touch''/
Dude’s Actin “Tough”, But Only “Cums Rough” When He’s In A “Rush” To ‘Bust-Butts’/
But Young Savage’s “Stuffed” Wit A ‘Robust-Crust’(Thick Skin) “Cuffed” Wit Enough “Thrusts” To "Combust-Guts" & Leave This ‘Slut-Hushed’/

*Damn Just A Little Hotter*

Use multiple “Method’s” to hit this “MAN” and leave him ~fucked where he stands~/
Axe in my palm, I’ll took both your legs with a ~swing of my hand~/
Only gotta “give 50%” in this battle cause now you are only ~half of a man~/

*You Gone Finish This Kat*

Make Ya "Guard Your Nightmares" To "Secure-Ya-Dreams"..'Top 25 Of All Time'?..I'll "Assure-You-Ur-Unseen"/
I'll fukin Cure-Ya-Scenes.. Cuz The Board Already "Takes Blak" For Granted Like "Mature-Pre-Teens"/

ayo,


what you like to write about,we can fight it out,
catch a punchline right in da mouth,
from da south, but more like a bitch in da hood,
i leave you stranded in a dark forest nigga, you lost in blak woods,
you gone find out why you shoulden't test niggaz you hearda,
you a herb mc, wonderin why you be gettin murdered,
you a lil faka copyin and pastin lyrics from friendz,
i like to shit on cats like you, you win, that depens,---(adult dipers)
you wouldn't bust a good verse if you read from the bible,
it'll neva happen, nigga i'm liable,
ta merk you then go afta somebody betta,
fuck line fa line, i kill you letta fa letta,
fuck this lil battle you get beat to bad,
young savage, more like a old puzz on da rag...


aight man..


damn that don't look like 10-16 lines....

it is its only 14...but if you think is to long i was caught up in my flow...so it like 16...but nice verse fam...uppin for votes

I seriously thought SAvage took this shit
His flow was hot... I was feelin' that shit
He no doubt had the word play
Blak-> Your shit wasn't that bad but you just caught some one in a flow... it's hard to stop.... You gots potential
VOTE- YOUNG SAVAGE

aight 1-0 me....we still uppin for explained votes

once again uppin

^^^

young savage- original__ (This guy sucks so bad he wants to "Kiss Me" just so we can "Change Spits"/
Mixed "Potassium" and "Guns" together and feed u "Banana Clips"/
better flow__exept when u so called "turned up the heat" the first time it got pretty forced lookin wit those muli's and kinda gay because of it

blac woods__bit too plain over few over played lines"what you like to write about,we can fight it out,
catch a punchline right in da mouth,
from da south, (((and it was your opener so that wasn't we played)
better punches___but i dont really like punches as much as a good flow

vote_ young savage, but u did take over 20mins after check in and had over 16 lines
and blac woods, he prolly had some pre-writen stuff in there cus it was his first time, but i can't prove it so imma still give this one to 'em

i wasent feeling young savage at the start of his verse but he started heating up later on flow got better and puches started landing harder.

Dark your sturcture was good, flow was aight but your punches didint hit that hard

overall young had better flow and a more creative verse and much more multis

vote - Young Savage

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110246

what ever nigga...but one thing how you gonna say you voted for me but then i look at the polls and it says you voted for blac woods???....mabye you clicked the wrong button or some shit.....and dawg stop hatin on all my battles fam...every battle i have you come in talkin shit like you nice...and for ya info i didn't pre-write theres no need don't be mad cause i'm better then you...but if you think your better set up a battle nigga...i'll help you get ya mind right....anys MODs can you check that voting situation out please...thanxs

uppin...for...votes...once again damn ya'll stop sleepin

uppin for votes......................................

uppin still for votes....people will you please wake ya ass up damn