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"butterflies" Feat my sister lol...
yeh i just felt motivated to write a song about this girl i like, i got my sister on the hook cos she can sing and i cant, she only 12 tht why she sounds soo young...
i replied to "mocking bird (remix) by lyrical warlord and "the game is down" by invektive yeh anyways i hope you like... this is my second ever audio lol.. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/e...ctionsmusic.htm |
uppinnn people.... everyone gettin feed apart form me...
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ight......quality aint that good...but its coo...its da net...lyrics were decent....ya sis its coo at singin...seems like u didnt ride tha beat as well as u shoulda....but its cool....aight track...keep elevatin homie..
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aight man thnx.... yeh my sis is a gd singer lol... sometiome i have trouble wit ma flow but aint nothin a bit of elevatin cant do
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always liked this beat, lyrics are kewl man, keep it up...you already know already know your flow could be better so there's no need to mention that again...werd, ya sister's kewl, with s'more practice ya'll will be a sikk ass duo haha...you got the basics down, you just be rushing yourself a bit...keep it up though, this is a good track...up the quality, work a bit on your flow, tell ya sister keep hittin' them noTes and ya'll with both be up to par ;)...
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^^ yeh man thanks for the feed.. i kinda had ta rush my words cos there was alot o em to fir in lol
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alrite peepin. i've always liked this beat. ya mic is booty man. you got a strange pronunciation. you almost sound english. but u let me no lol. the chorus is impressive for a 12 year old. im not gonna knock on this song if its only ur second track. cuz its prob better than the second track i ever made. lyrics are kinda basic. just keep spittin n ull elevate. peep my track n leave sum feed.
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well i am english lol.....
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yo the beat is dope, i always thought it was ill.......
quality is quite bad...ur flow is ok, feels rushed a lot, like u had more time ont he beat and didint use it....lyrical content is pretty simple, i.e no multis, rhymeschemes......the hook is okay for a 12 yr old singin shell b dope in time, but in the grand scheme of things it aint that effective or catchy in my opinion....if this is your second ever track this is so dope comapred to shit i was spittin..keep em comin homie RTF on my Mad Dog Diss....where you may have recieved a mention lol :thumbup: |
aight man thnx for teh feed i really appriciate it... yeh it is my second ever audio :) ill be droppin em like flies in time... ill rtf favour now
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Listening: Mockingbird beat = nice choice... flow is aight i wont comment on quality meh @ lo-fi lyrics is straight some nice rhymes.. sis ain't too bad but ya coulda threw some editing on their like a chorus effect woulda sounded better but straight hook... overall this a good track 2nd hook sounded held back
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oooo... love this beat. Nice shit. first thing I noticed yo quality sucks, lol, but that can be fixed. Yo word pronunciation is not that great, but wit practice yo shit will improve. Pretty nice flow tho. Lyrics were coo, couldn't hear much tho. Yo sis on the hook is pretty nice. She 12 so you can't expect the best, but it was coo. Overall 6/10. keep elevating man. pc yo. one.
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ight man... appriciate the feed i got my acuity diss coming to ya later u all best peep it...
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yeah u didnt choose bad beat for this song, and quality isnt to good but song isnt bad to be ya second recording its not bad you have start from somewhere so stay up 1
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