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DQ 02-13-06 02:44 PM

The Revelation (0-0) vs. BlAzInHoT (0-0) vs. .:~SoldieR~:. (0-2)
 
Battles go up on MONDAY
Pieces are due FRIDAY
Voting ends SUNDAY/MONDAY


Rules can be found: here


TOPICS FOR WEEK 5: here


Please state who gets first, second and third place. The one with most votes will get 2 points, the second 1 and the third will be deducted 1 point. If one of them no-shows, the usual voting process is required.

Sean Gunner 02-13-06 07:05 PM

You stand in a room filled with world leaders. In front of you, there is a button. If you push it, a nuclear bomb will be dropped on rogue states (such as Iraq, Iran,...). One side is telling you to do it, the other begs you not to. Show both reasonings and what you decide.

^^My topic.

BlAzInHoT 02-14-06 09:56 AM

lol im doing the The Awakening, wtf is up wit that gay one?? fucked up shit

BlAzInHoT 02-14-06 01:28 PM

nvm im doin ON THE BRINK also can i spit friday cuz i got alot of otha shit goin on rite now, im in two otha topical battles besides this one n a text battle due on thursday. n i would have time friday ta do it, if i cant ge the extension, ill try to spit by thursday, but cant promise anythin

DQ 02-14-06 01:45 PM

It's due Friday, not Thursday :thumbup:

BlAzInHoT 02-15-06 09:36 AM

oh, couldv swore that it was due thursday, good

BlAzInHoT 02-16-06 12:56 PM

found like 10 minutes to do this lol, keystyle baby so dont expect a masterpiece

crewsin on the bummpy road in the cold sweet~night, passin under the street~lights
I reach a high bridge, and my feet~fight to keep on goin, but i stop, excete~fright

As i pull the car ova to the~side of the bridges road, im thinkin why did she~died?
alantic oceans this hard G~cried, god dammit I to really keep strong i really~tried

but lost it all after i left intoxicated from the~bar, shakin, I get out of the~car
leavin the door open, its swingin bak and forth, im thinkin, go onto my knees~stars

up in the large black sky~shining, far in the distance i hear a loud high~whining
fire truck i figure, start askin where are you god? please to me why not try~signin

to me if i should do this or~should~not,i was happy when she was here before~those~shots
rang out n sprang out n struk n killed her, now in this world theres nothin anymore~I~got

to fukin live for, i bound up on short~wall of the bridge, lookin down, not a short~fall
to the end, dark water lying beneath my eyes, people pullin over n this report~calls

to local police, they sayin man bout to jump~to~death, i stary cry, heart pumps~blood~beth
was my baby, my girl, the only fukin person i have left in this world, i stump~my~breath

bout to fall down, but then the police~arrive n startle me before i take my nice~long~dive
one comes near,he means peace~i~strive to listen, do you really want to cease~to~survive?

he ask me, i respond i dont~no with confusion, he keeps talkin, i keep listenin i wont~go
to heaven hes tellin me now, man dont~throw your life away my heart pounding it wont~slow

close my eyes, turn to jump, i~fall, feel somethin grasp my waist in the cold air i~stall
the rope tighly around and i slamm into the bridges high~wall,they start tuggin i~call

out loudly in pain of the rope sqeezin my~waist, they pullin me up at a very high~pace
in no time at all im bak up at the high~base, i see their faces as my body they enbrace

n pull me in toward them n put me in their~car, by night in prison in a cell square~bars
stoppin my break out, thinkin, her death almost killed myself n brought me way to damn far

uppin ya'lls

DQ 02-18-06 05:04 PM

Double no-show

BlAzInHoT wins


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