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I'm new at rappin, and need some help! Please somebody, help me!!!
I just started rappin, and I want somebody to help me out with my stuff. Anyone interested in helpin' me? If u are give e-mail me at SPuL7988@aol.com.
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thanks, man. Yea, I noticed the tutorial page after i posted this. I copied them and pasted them on Microsoft word. lol Hopefully, nobody minds. But Feeble looks like he has many people wantin' his help, so would anybody else be interested in helpin' me out?
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what u need help with exactly?? pm me
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thanks, man. I sent u a PM. I just basically want someone to look at my stuff and analyze it by each bar.
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pm me a verse, everyone else on here is garbage except me ryuu and syntax mastery
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116499
That's my most recent verse |
you have an humorous style which is good, but your flow could be better
you should try using multi-syllable rhyming ex. your first bars ends with get torched in seconds/ your second would be im sick wit torture methods/ |
try it
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ok, I'll try that once I get home from skool. But I still don't get it. Is it that if you use a word like you used torched, you then use a word that's close to it like torture? Someone told me that ur bars should have the same amount of syllables in it, but I guess that's wrong. But if u have AIM, could u prolly explain it to me there? My AIM is SPuL7988. thanks
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Hahahahahahahahaahahahahahaahahahaha... :-p
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