Rising Sun vs Drakel
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-28-05 at 12:38 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-05 12:40 AM.
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alright, its officially christmas....here's a little present for you
got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned kerplow... |
Rising Sun has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-05 03:41 AM.
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Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~
~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~ My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~…. Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~ Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~ I’ll ~damage ya~ with magical skills like I’m ~David Blaine~, and you should be ~ashamed to say~ That you named yourself after a video ~game~ And while you ~spit flows~, I’ll make your ~bitch blow~, every time her ~lips glow~ The type to ~hit hoes~, you better ~get low~ cause I’ll torture you like a troop at ~GITMO~ Admit your ~shit yo~ cause your facing ~ridicule~ when times are ~critical~ You could turn away from rap, start golfing, and you still wouldn’t be “hitting” your ~pinnacle~ |
upping............................................
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Voted For: Rising Sun
Rising Sun - You had a great flow, you used alot of good multi's, punches where hitten hard and good personals. Best Line - My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~…. Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~ Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~ Worst Line - NONE Drakel - You had an ok flow, your punches where ok, and you had good personals. Best Line - got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink Worst Line - this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I was feelin' Suns verse more overall. He used good multi's, strong punches and ok personals. Drakel, you flowed ok, your personals where good, your punches where not all that great. Vote - Rising Sun Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ like fuck off with your bloody ignorance...i can't wait to kick the shit out of you
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bump for some legit votes...........................
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bump this .
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Voted For: Drakel
Most of Drakel's verse. vrs. Nothing. Honestly, the ~ is annoying as fuck. Also, your wordplay was shit and you can tell when people use all this fancy ~*bold shit that it's going to be a verse packed full of lines with played wordplay. Drakel came good, though the 'sunned' line is pretty basic and it's a nameplay he'll probably see in 90% of people's verses. |
This was feedback posted for Rising Sun
stop with the swiggly lines mutha fuker.
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stop with not voting :shoot:
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vote .
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Voted For: Drakel
Rising Sun: Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~ ~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~ My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~…. Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~ Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~ I’ll ~damage ya~ with magical skills like I’m ~David Blaine~, and you should be ~ashamed to say~ That you named yourself after a video ~game~ And while you ~spit flows~, I’ll make your ~bitch blow~, every time her ~lips glow~ The type to ~hit hoes~, you better ~get low~ cause I’ll torture you like a troop at ~GITMO~ Admit your ~shit yo~ cause your facing ~ridicule~ when times are ~critical~ You could turn away from rap, start golfing, and you still wouldn’t be “hitting” your ~pinnacle~ ^^ Usually i break down verses bar for bar but since your structure is fucked i cant really do that... SOOOOOO overall your verse was weak all you had was multies, the punches were subpar no good metas or personals. Your verse practically consisted of nothing. Overall: 10/60 (17%) Drakel: got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink ^^good opener nice meta 7/10 your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon ^^ok bar coulda been worded better 5/10 i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses ^^lol humor 4/10 im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court ^^good bar 6/10 leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages ^^ok meta 5/10 this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned ^^couple good metas here, ok closer 6/10 Overall: 33/60 (55%) Vote: Drakel RTF with an honest vote on the battle in my sig plz!!! |
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