Tha Flash vs PlaTinuM_
 

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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 07:27 AM

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PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 06:58 AM.

I could take diz bytch out in a flash
ill jack ya shyt up evan da cash
ya betta no be frontin or youll be dead
ur bytch dont evan love u, datz wat she said
nigga tryna say he got mad rhymez
diz h0e iz poor he only got a couple dimez
mu fuker tryn start SouthSide Arsenal?
nigga got jacked up so out aside ya personal
iight ima close diz battle hopefully u aint dat dissed
now ya ruby ass dead u aint neva gon get missed

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 07:18 AM.

i take it u my next victim outta my six wins
i'll leave ya heart pumping up and down like car pistons
so nigga take ya place
before i leave ya tongue tied like it was part of a shoe lace
why u quick to decline i wanna see what ya man says
and spread ya brain out like a chunk of mayonaise
so when i'm done you'll be needing more then bandaids
so i'm gonna hang this battle on the wall like a platinum record
and leave more drugs in ya system then what they pack at eckerds
and i'm feirce so battling me is like battling a pack of leopards

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle an we'll return the favor

Voted For: Tha Flash

nice yo... ate him up... like ya style homie... fa shiggady

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thx, uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Wack Battle..

Platinum gets my vote cause even tho this battle was kinda weak..his punches came harder tha Flash's..structure wasn't stretched~out (but was in place tho)...and tha flow was pretty decent...

Flash..yo punches were decent..could've been harder..structure was ok..and tha flow fell a little...(elevate more tho)..

Overall..my vote goes to PlaTinuM_..cuz his punches came a little harder than Tha Flash's...

Voted For: Tha Flash

ok all n all dis battle was 1 sided

Punches - FLASH....his shyt was actually makin sense...n he had a few decent barz in there two...good shyt

Meta4s - FLASH....no question...his shyt had metas n some of em were new 2 me...good shyt wit dat shoe lace bar...wasnt hard but i never heard it b4...good shyt

Personals - tie...i think u both had like 1 personal punch...kinda weak 2...work on that yall !

Wordplay - tie...both was pretty simple...no versatility....get more creative

Enjoyment - FLASH...obvious...flash took this battle easy...his punches were more direct n he actually had metas 2 so that took da cake on dis...Plat u sounded like u were just ramblin on n on...none of it was hard fam...up ur game...~1~

Vote - Flash


~1~

This was feedback posted for Tha Flash
 

weak battle.

Punches- Flash
Flow- Flash
Multis- Neither
Personals- Plat cuz he tried
Wordplay- Flash
Metas- Flash

Plat your verse wuz to elementary compared to Flash. Weak punches both of ya. Plat tried a personal. Well here.

Tha Flash:
"so i'm gonna hang this battle on the wall like a platinum record
and leave more drugs in ya system then what they pack at eckerds" eh decent. word it different.

Platinum:
I cant find one i can post.

v/Flash if i could vote