sHoTTaBoY vs Street poet
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-13-04 at 05:54 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 05:25 PM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 05:26 PM.

...:::Warm Ups:::...
Darker than a "cave" SHOTTA is about to try ta "bear" this lyrikal nightmare// 1
You witnessin' tha evil-lare of destruction, senile-glare like the "evil munchkin"// 2
I got him runnin' scared half ta-death next think u know he breathin' hard cuz i took away half his-breath// 3
Merkers-depth how far am i gonna go destroying this emcee until there ain't nuttin' left// 4

...:::Getting Heated Up:::...
"Vile-lyrics" of painful infliction goes "around" faster than a "West Nile-Spherix"// 5
Fearin'-this after hearin'-this starts pounding your insides till they can't handle-it// 6
Dismantlement of tha "human-brain" will leave you like "gays" "bloomin-flames"// 7
New powerful "reign"(rain) of lyrics "showering" over you ta tha point you'll never b tha same// 8

...:::BlaZing:::...
"Blazing" of this emcee while he sitting there "gazing" into this lyrical "hazing"// 9
These lyrical-"rayz" will leave you "lazy" to tha point your more of a "newbie" than your "baby"// 10
I'm "burnin" you wit my "spit", burnin' your face as if my saliva was "acidic"// 11
If you was a "computer" than i would be "hackin-it", and if i was a "dick" i suppose you would be "wackin-it"// 12
Floating in tha air high on my rhymes, like back to tha future i'ma put u in tha "future" or maybe just "back in time"// 13
Just cuz you be "slackin'-lines" more than tha "stitching of pants" but i'm gonna give u credit for fuckin' tryin'// 14

Man, I'm So ''Sick'' One By One I'll Run Thru Ya Family Like The ''Flew''..
U Cant Counterattack These Weaponless ''Attacks'' I'm ''Throwin'' Like Lyrical ''jujutsu''...

Man, I'ma Set A ''mine'' On This ''BattleField''..
The Lyrics Got U Trapped n U Stepped To The ''Front Line'' n Defeat Was ''Sealed''..

This Nigguhz Sittin Here Flirtin With My ''Metaphors''...
..Payin (Rappers) Money To Get ''Fucked Over'' Like A ''Lyrical Whore''..
..On ''All Fours'' Claimin Dick Is The Key To ''Unlock'' His Sexual ''Doors''..
This Kids Rhymes Are On ''Rasion'' Like Hes In A ''world War''...

Man, Ya Records Three-To-Nil, But Ya Skill? You've Yet To ''Show'It''...
Ya Live In The ''Suburbs'' n Rhymes One ''Word'' n Now This Bitch Is A ''Poet''...!!!

Rashion? ...IU Dunno How Ya Spell That, But Nice Verse...


Upppin Ya'll

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

This was a tight battle.
Street had some good shit, but i wasnt feeling the flow.. it was hard to read and got confusing after a while. But u did have good vocab, needed some better structure.
Shotta's flow was sick... i got into it. his metas seemed more focused and easy to understand. need some better vocab i think.

Honest VOte

Voted For: Street poet

NICE BATTLE BOTH HAD THA VOCAB AND THA STRUCTURE EASY 2 READ...BUT I THINK STREET PULLED THIS OFF BY A INCH CUS HE HAD HARDER DISSES AND "BLAZING" PUNCHLINES

BATTLE WAS HOT GOOD SHIT BOTH OF YALL

Uppin Damn It Uppin

yup fa sho, the battle was hot, nice drop poet, holla if u wanna do a collabo or anythin

upppin fools......

Ok I'll Do An Callbo With U, Whats Da Topic//

I'll Start Typin And Post Tonight!

upin

upppin this shit

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

lol @ sick one by one... ill run thru ya crew like the FLEW... u bitting.. CANIBUS lyrics... but u added FAMILY and not CREW.. lmfao...

Yo If He Bittin Da Lyrics Post A Link To Prove It If U Dont Den Dont Say Nutthin