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El Taco 07-28-07 09:19 PM

High Knucks vs phenom1
 
Battle Rules:

6 bars Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-31-07 at 09:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-28-07 09:36 PM

phenom1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:36 PM.

phenom1 07-28-07 09:37 PM

Yo Ima Post Mines In A Lil Bit lAter Today?
Are You Gonna Post Yours Today

System 07-28-07 09:49 PM

High Knucks has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:49 PM.

phenom1 07-28-07 10:27 PM

Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*

Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)

Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***

This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****

Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****

Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******


* Directions For Like AirPlanes
** I Flipped The Bathroom And The Shit From The Toilet Hit The Roof
*** Bay=Keep Him Calm, And Also That’s Where Most Summer Homes Are The Bay
**** He’ll Ask For A ReMatch, Like When Theives Take Double
***** A Fishing Line
****** Point Finger

El Taco 07-28-07 10:57 PM

take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport

phenom1 07-28-07 11:03 PM

yo good Battle Mayne, But Lets Get Some Votes On This
Votes??????

Diet Coke 07-28-07 11:17 PM

Voted For: High Knucks

phenom1
Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
That was pretty weak.
Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
Not bad.
Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
Nah.
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
Not feeling this.
Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
Whack.
Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
No.

Pretty whack verse, nothing to special stood out at all, was actually a pretty difficult read. Work on your structure, a bit on flow, and don't explain everything. If a punch is good it won't need an explanation. Good attempt, keep elevating and dropping.


High Knucks
take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
Not bad.
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
Lmfao.
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
Ehh..
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
Easy, but made me laugh.
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
Word.
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport
I dig it.

Not bad, can tell it's been a while since you've battled. Still got some magic, flow was dope, some punches were pretty funny. You got this easy.

Vote: High Knucks



Removed - crew vote

phenom1 07-29-07 12:29 AM

Yo Can We Get Some More Votes On This One Please
Good Battle So Far Knucks

Clova 07-29-07 12:32 AM

Voted For: phenom1

This was better no doubt about it no dick ridin good cuz knucks u brag alot for sumone not that great!

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Germ 07-29-07 12:38 AM

Voted For: High Knucks

check



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phenom1 07-29-07 12:38 AM

Yo Thanks MAyne, But Is Germ, Bull And Knucks Spose To Have The Same Ip?????

El Taco 07-29-07 12:59 PM

shut up, your verse was gay

JWILD 07-29-07 08:16 PM

This was feedback posted for phenom1
 
open: Phenom- I felt the first line
close: Definantly Phenom1...High Knucks it seemed like you were searching for something to rhyme with "this board" and came up with "airport"...I realize though that this is in keeping with the airport/directions theme from Phenom's first 2 lines. Still a little weak...
personals: tie
metas: Phenom
punches: High Knucks..."you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes" I felt that
multis: Tie
close one...but
Win: phenom

Vote Added

Journal!st 07-29-07 11:42 PM

Voted For: phenom1

Meh i have Phenom winning this with more multies that caved around punches man... sorry he gets my vote as his were more hitting and more interesting and intriguing than high knucks.... som played but it was a hit at least not a statement or such


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