insane16 vs. !!! Infamous J !!!
 

1o bars i'ma spit in this shit, don





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Check It Out...
 

10 bars...
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i be more INSANE than that CLOWN POSSE
and i'm 16 and my raps give you sweat scare dreams
you'll be fucked if you walk thru da street of queens
cauze i'll spread ya brains all over you'll be PLEASE, LET ME LIVE IN PEACE :help:
this is halftime so give yourself a break cauze you next
it's like i scored 16 runs and you only got one pitcher left
you ain't crazy, you weak
give yourself a week of rehab just cauze you waz fuckin wit me
i mudered you and that's it
ain't no need to spit back cauze than that'll make no sense.
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VOTERZ HOLLA BACK!!!!

nobody hasn't voted yet, dawg
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nobody vot3ed cuz i aint spit yet sry it took so damn long but now im hear checkin in.......................

this kids a rookie even though his shyt says flyweight/
smash this fagget like potatoes he still couldnt fill my-plate/
at the firts site of me ima cause ur pupils to diolate/
wit twin glocks ima make u feel the freeze/
weaken ya knees what the fuk was u thinkin messin wit me/
u wouldnt do shyt even if i pushed rock on the conner of ur block/
u a lil bitch so ima use bullets as a replacement for ur cock/
you called for 10 bars dumbass its ten lines/
but it would be a waste of brain for me to give ya a piece of my mind/
if tupac jacked off on this bitches head he still couldnt get his head to stick to dem rhymes/

iight this shyt is ova lets get dem votes in.....

Flow - Tie. Both had some lines that were a little too long and didn't quite fit in.
Punches - insane16 gets this category. I thought the line about potatoes was funny.
Multis - None to really comment on
Metas, etc - Not many but Insane takes it

All in all a close battle but insane wins with stronger punches.



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621

iight 1-0 me lets get this shyt goin uppin............................................. ..............

both of u need to up on ya vocab flow on both sides was aight punches is going to insane
vote/insane

infamous - wow...urs sucked....3 werds in one line than 30 werds in the next....fucked up your flow....no punches....didnt even rhyme....elevate on everything you do....u need to stop sayin stupid shit in ur verse....it makes no sense....bad bad bad verse....

insane - okay ur verse was better than his....but it wasnt that great...but u tried out sum punches...and urs flowed...thats why u win....elevate kid...u need to use meta's and personals....go to tutorials and practice....

Vote - insane

iight thynx you uppin this for the 2nd time.............................................. .......................

uppin for the third time.............................................. .................................................. .......................

ok
 

i be more INSANE than that CLOWN POSSE
and i'm 16 and my raps give you sweat scare dreams
SOUNDS LIKE YA TALKIN 2 EM 4/10
you'll be fucked if you walk thru da street of queens
cauze i'll spread ya brains all over you'll be PLEASE, LET ME LIVE IN PEACE
BETA BUT STILL WEAK 5/10
this is halftime so give yourself a break cauze you next
it's like i scored 16 runs and you only got one pitcher left
THIS IS BETA AT LEAST ITS A PUNCH 7/10
you ain't crazy, you weak
give yourself a week of rehab just cauze you waz fuckin wit me
AWFUL-3/10
i mudered you and that's it
ain't no need to spit back cauze than that'll make no sense.
THIS DNT MAKE SENSE 3/10

U NEED A LOT HARDER PUNCHES n u had no personals
u need ur verses 2 rhyme
tryin keep ur verses the same length
if u can think shit up like that pitcher line ull elevate
gud luk..............

INSANE 16
this kids a rookie even though his shyt says flyweight/
smash this fagget like potatoes he still couldnt fill my-plate/
FUNNY...8/10
at the firts site of me ima cause ur pupils to diolate/
wit twin glocks ima make u feel the freeze/
OK cuda cum harder 7/10
weaken ya knees what the fuk was u thinkin messin wit me/
u wouldnt do shyt even if i pushed rock on the conner of ur block/
ALRIGHT-again b more personal 7/10
lil bitch so ima use bullets as a replacement for ur cock/
you called for 10 bars dumbass its ten lines/
NICE DISS-7/10
But it would be a waste of brain for me to give ya a piece of my mind/
if tupac jacked off on this bitches head he still couldnt get his head to stick to dem rhymes/
HAHA-i like this-8/10

ok sure u can see who won,insane 16-jus bring it a bit more personal n hard...other than that woz good

infamous....u need 2 step up everything...elevate.....seriously that woz weak

I vote for insane because he ryhmed throught his whole verse
they both was wavk, but in a RAPPING battle
all your words have to ryhme
anyway
Insane's verse was better because he had more punches..
Infamous verse was wack because he had less punches
and I didnt like his verse because it wasnt entertaining
v/insane