Chris Cassius & XL - MC's
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1st verse - XL 2nd verse - ME Feedback: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3156530 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3156528 |
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word up i remember doin that scary movie shit with you when i first was startin off....lets see how much you upped ya game.......
you still forcin some shit for the sake of your lyrics, n its bringin ya flow down a bit....at the beg...you still got pretty ill punches....it was short...which was lame, bump that up anoter verse or two i was just gettin into it.... not much wrong here cept at the beg of your verse it was a bit forced....your gettin more comfortable on the mic tho....your quality is a bit better n what not....i like this, its a nice lil joint shoulda been longer tho..... rtf on LIGHTS OUT |
yo man wuz not feelin this joint at all.......ya flow wuz weird quality wasn't all there........but yo man i peep'd ya Triple Threat Pt 3. shit is hot.....ya verse wuz nice a lil choppy but ya delivery wuz nice on it.....just add more syllables to maintain a constant flow.....aiite fam......
pz ~1~ |
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