FLiPakaJR vs ..decree..
 

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6 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-18-05 at 09:30 AM

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FLiPakaJR has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 09:31 AM.

..Decree.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-15-05 09:43 AM.

let me rip open my body, get a good look inside who you facin
deliver rhymez connected bombz, explode text to get dem shakin//
8 linez pentrated to ya face, but worse than michael jackson
dis heavyweight put pressure so decree can't hold dis ton//
accepted battle with torment, like lil kidz in football gamez
never take a glimpse back at you like old throw back fame//
I bring pain in da conclusion, i body out your whole verse,
why bring it and still come(cum) when your a bitches mouth who still thirst//

well i guess u win lol i'm not dat good in text....still tryin my best

lol sall good fams im hella rusty im audio now so text is big ass difference...

Voted For: ..Decree..

degree take this for easy.more and better punches........
better flow...better stucture...........
i know he a "pee wee" an fucks wit "her-man"then hollas rape..
cause this kids verse is more "anal" than paris on her sex tape..

lol.that was good punch.really like this.........

flip dont get hard punches(maybe cauze he is newbie)
flow wasnt as good as degree..............
whole verse doesnt have as good like degree.......
VOTE:DEGREE

Voted For: ..Decree..

flip:
let me rip open my body, get a good look inside who you facin
deliver rhymez connected bombz, explode text to get dem shakin//
^^^1ST LINE WAS ALRITE...SECOND WAS WACK
8 linez pentrated to ya face, but worse than michael jackson
dis heavyweight put pressure so decree can't hold dis ton//
^^^^I HATED DA WAY DIS SHIT RYHMED
accepted battle with torment, like lil kidz in football gamez
never take a glimpse back at you like old throw back fame//
^^^WACK
I bring pain in da conclusion, i body out your whole verse,
why bring it and still come(cum) when your a bitches mouth who still thirst//
^^^DIDN'T MAKE NO SENSE AT ALL FAM...


decree:
I'm eclipsen this kid like tha sun moon an stars...
his flows choopy..homo...like "pickup" lines at gay bars...
^^DECENT
he has no punches just fillers thicker than venis..
willams hips..i know he swings to tha left like R rated's penis..(crooked!)
^^^1ST LATIN KITTEN SAID DIS..THEN DA WHOLE RV DID..ITS PLAYED FAM
with all this wordplay i got his head "buzzin" like wes niles...
virus..cause he showin up "sleepy" for this battle like jackos trials...
^^OKAY
i know he a "pee wee" an fucks wit "her-man"then hollas rape..
cause this kids verse is more "anal" than paris on her sex tape..
^^I AINT SEE DA TAPE BUT I HEARD IT WAS CRAZEE..DA 1ST LINE WAS DOPE THO

V/DECREE...

RTF....LINKS IN MY SIG & HAVE BATTLES ALL OVA DA FRONTLINES

This was feedback posted for ..Decree..
 

sorry fellahs this battle was hela good.........
i cant really vote for one of you........
both of yall had some punches....good battle overall...

This was feedback posted for ..Decree..
 

nigga wha?.............................................. ......

Voted For: ..Decree..

FlipakaJR:

let me rip open my body, get a good look inside who you facin
deliver rhymez connected bombz, explode text to get dem shakin//
^^no 1/10
8 linez pentrated to ya face, but worse than michael jackson
dis heavyweight put pressure so decree can't hold dis ton//
^^no 0/10 MJ lines = played
accepted battle with torment, like lil kidz in football gamez
never take a glimpse back at you like old throw back fame//
^^no 1/10
I bring pain in da conclusion, i body out your whole verse,
why bring it and still come(cum) when your a bitches mouth who still thirst//
^^wow 1/10

Overall: 3/40 (0.75%)

Decree:

I'm eclipsen this kid like tha sun moon an stars...
his flows choopy..homo...like "pickup" lines at gay bars...
^^ehh 1/10
he has no punches just fillers thicker than venis..
willams hips..i know he swings to tha left like R rated's penis..(crooked!)
^^lol 7/10
with all this wordplay i got his head "buzzin" like wes niles...
virus..cause he showin up "sleepy" for this battle like jackos trials...
^^ehh 2/10
i know he a "pee wee" an fucks wit "her-man"then hollas rape..
cause this kids verse is more "anal" than paris on her sex tape..
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 16/40 (40%)

Vote: Decree

Stop Battling Newbs

Voted For: FLiPakaJR

ur shit is hot man u did that man every thing u did was nice

Voted For: ..Decree..

..Decree.. verse

I'm eclipsen this kid like tha sun moon an stars...
his flows choopy..homo...like "pickup" lines at gay bars...
^ played opener

he has no punches just fillers thicker than venis..
willams hips..i know he swings to tha left like R rated's penis..(crooked!)
^ more of a diss at R-Rated and thats played too

with all this wordplay i got his head "buzzin" like wes niles...
virus..cause he showin up "sleepy" for this battle like jackos trials...
^ Jacko...but on a recent topic better bar

i know he a "pee wee" an fucks wit "her-man"then hollas rape..
cause this kids verse is more "anal" than paris on her sex tape..
^ Nice closer...gave me a nice image of Paris Hilton...

Overall
Started sloppy wit some played bars but picked up all in all a good verse kept it nice on the flow & structure good verse to the end

FLiPakaJR's verse

let me rip open my body, get a good look inside who you facin
deliver rhymez connected bombz, explode text to get dem shakin//
^ no punch no personal...no diss...wack opener

8 linez pentrated to ya face, but worse than michael jackson
dis heavyweight put pressure so decree can't hold dis ton//
^ self-g blah[b]

accepted battle with torment, like lil kidz in football gamez
never take a glimpse back at you like old throw back fame//
[b]^ attempted punch hit = minor coulda been better

I bring pain in da conclusion, i body out your whole verse,
why bring it and still come(cum) when your a bitches mouth who still thirst//
^ weak closer

Overall
Not a good verse you A need to work on punches a lot was played and not there you need to diss your guy in a battle it's what you do. B lose the // thing it's wack and makes ya verse look more newb than it's coming across...keep at it you'll get better as time goes on

v/Decree...RTF in my sig 3 days or vote removed


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