Voted For: Lil J76

i vote for lil because his punches hit harder and he had a lil bit of wordplay
mfp had a personal but he didnt follow up wit anything hard after that vote lil

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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..

Voted For: M.F.P

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lil:
Yo, M.F.P stands for a mutha fuckin punk..this guy couldn't rap if he rolled wit a shit load of reynolds wrap in his trunk.//
Your style of rhyme should be considered garbage~cuz ya shit is junk.//Stretched wack.....3/10
What you didn't realize is u fuckin wit a Vet..My profile may make me look like a rook but looks can be decieving ,n ya not ready yet.//
M.F.P suck dick like a prostiute on a L.A set.//
basic.....4/10
I leave you marred n scared wit stiches all over.//
Have stumblin and n homless like a bum whos never sober.//
weak5/10
You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.//
N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.//
iight finisher....6/10
overall=18/40

mfp:
Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color)
damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/ok....5/10
this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/
when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/basic......4/10
Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/
Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/personal.....7/10
Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./
Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./5
overall=21/40

vote=m.f.p

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checking something for MFP cuz I'm that much more gangsta than both of you

Voted For: M.F.P

i vote mfp.. its a close one.. but he had harder punches that hit a little harder.. his structure was wack but so was J's so its hard to judge there.. but overall mfp had this one

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hmmmmmmmm one sided battle nice verse m.f.p and lil j nice mayne//

i cant vote but i can leave an feedback

lil j

Yo, M.F.P stands for a mutha fuckin punk..this guy couldn't rap if he rolled wit a shit load of reynolds wrap in his trunk.//
Your style of rhyme should be considered garbage~cuz ya shit is junk.// IT WAS AN GOOD OPENER

What you didn't realize is u fuckin wit a Vet..My profile may make me look like a rook but looks can be decieving ,n ya not ready yet.//
M.F.P suck dick like a prostiute on a L.A set.// ITS AN PUNCH WITH AN PERSONALS

I leave you marred n scared wit stiches all over.//
Have stumblin and n homless like a bum whos never sober.//
You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.//
N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.//
NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH


M.F.P

Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color)
damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/
HMMMM NICE PUNCH PERSONAL

this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/
when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/
// GOOD PUNCH (KINDA)

Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/
Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/
Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./
Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./
NOT BAD FOR AN CLOSA

DIS SHIT GOES TO LIL J IAM POSTIN AN FEEDBACK DIS IS NOT AN VOTE

Voted For: Lil J76

Both drops were a bit WEAK, but Lil got my v cause his shit was more creative, and the other nigga just basically rode his own dick in his drop. Lil also had more wordplay and multis, BUT I wouldn't say he's no fuckin vet like he says in line 4 tho. all in all Lil's shit was nicer

v//LilJ76 aight -1-

o and u both could elevate some but thats just bein real no hate just reality

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And my bad M.F.P. didn't realize we was crew, but the nigga got u elevate nigga this comin from ya own crew aight -1- :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

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lol puling a shottboy ill vote on this. lol jsut checkin it out the scores

Voted For: M.F.P

M.F.P -
Yo punches were hard and they landed...
Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)...
Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once...
And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all...
7/10

J76-
Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also...
Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out...
Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall...
And your vocab was aight too...
6/10

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Voted For: Lil J76

lil u came harder better punches and lyrics nice structure ya shit was nice

MFP
yo mayn u gotta elavate sum like 4 reals mayn


so LIL376
got my vote cuzz he came harder wit better punches

Voted For: M.F.P

Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color)
damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT PERSONAL AND A PUNCH MAYNE

this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/
when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH MAYNE & PERSONAL

Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/
Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/
Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./
Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./
^^^^^^^^^^ HA HA HA NICE CLOSA MAYNE

I HAVE TO GO WITH M.F.P CUZ OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

YO LIL J U HAD AN GOOD VERSE BUT M.F.P. (EDGE) IT A LIL WIT DEM PERSONAL AND PUNCHES

NO BEEF NO HATIN

LIL J KEEP DOING YO THANG

WORK ON DEM PUNCHES MAKE DEM HARD AIGHT MAYNE

I VOTED FOR M.F.P FOR HARDER PUNCHES W/ PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Voted For: M.F.P

thats cold nice punches and personals wow that closer was raw as fuck hey return tha favor

Voted For: M.F.P

Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./
Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./














that line, and your INSANE wordplay is what made me think you took this battle. That and the other guy put these things '~' in his verus, thats SO like 03 ish!!!


you get my vote FO SHO!

Voted For: M.F.P

v mfp............................................... ...battle closed