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M.F.P vs Lil J76
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-19-04 at 08:41 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
M.F.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 08:42 PM.
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yo this is messed up lol
i put 8 - 10 lines but it didn't do that the otha stuff messed up to but i'll leave those alone so here are the rules i wanted Battle Rules: 8 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting |
yo i'm checkin in
so here we go................ |
Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color)
damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/ this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/ when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/ Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/ Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/ Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./ Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./ |
Lil J76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 09:39 PM.
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Yo, M.F.P stands for a mutha fuckin punk..this guy couldn't rap if he rolled wit a shit load of reynolds wrap in his trunk.//
Your style of rhyme should be considered garbage~cuz ya shit is junk.// What you didn't realize is u fuckin wit a Vet..My profile may make me look like a rook but looks can be decieving ,n ya not ready yet.// M.F.P suck dick like a prostiute on a L.A set.// I leave you marred n scared wit stiches all over.// Have stumblin and n homless like a bum whos never sober.// You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.// N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.// |
Hey yo, good shit man now lets get some votes up in here.
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yeah u too .............
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Voted For: Lil J76
great flow man great punchlines u did real well on this one especially "You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.// N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.//" Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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^like i said uppin the limit lol
ne ways yeah uppin fo sum votes. |
Voted For: Lil J76
give it 2 Lil J even dough the structure was fucked ur flow was better didn't really understand wut M.F.P was tryna say v/Lil J vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS EMCEE SHADOW(L.I.) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142848 DON(topical) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 E DUBZ(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143740 BostonLyricist http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143837 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin fo sum votes up in here make em honest too.
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Voted For: Lil J76
LIL376 U got my vote u came at his name hard as shit and he didnt do nuthin bout it all round u was betta////// m f p u was iight but vocab wasnt u gotta up ya vocab mayne it sounds like u 12(no hate) up da vocab and ull b nice vote=lil376 VOTE FOR MY BATTLE AGAINST ICE PICK http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144176 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..c-mon yall!!
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..c-mon yall!!
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This was feedback posted for M.F.P
some decent drops not gonna vote don't wanna be called a d/r because M.F.P. makes my siggy's i liked that last line though M.F.P. and that midget line by lil was funny too...
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yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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This was feedback posted for M.F.P
i aint even votin on this shit.....it was horrible.....pretty even to me....n feedback on anyone....just postin my thoughts of it
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Voted For: M.F.P
yo man do i rewalli gotta explain my self his punchlines were nice as shyt he had sum tight ass ryhmes n he had tha flow so my vot=mfp Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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Voted For: Lil J76
ima giv dis to lil j76 cause both verse wasnt as good as dey could of been but i think lil j had betta punches dats why im given it to him both need to elevate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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Voted For: Lil J76
lil j76...i hate yo name, but yo flow doesnt have me feeln the same bout you...MFP i seen better from you...wayyy...j76 started this battle off like i started mine against mfp...wow!!!...but j76, you had some nice punches that hit hard from start to finish...you had some personals in there..and yo strucutre was clean... mfp, nooooo...not good at all to me, punches didnt hit...personals?!?....idk...elevate return a HONEST EXPLAINED vote....People |
Voted For: Lil J76
i vote for lil because his punches hit harder and he had a lil bit of wordplay mfp had a personal but he didnt follow up wit anything hard after that vote lil PLEASE DONT IGNORE!! return the fav wit an honost vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146187 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146714 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo.... uppin for votes on dis one yall. leave a link an I'll vote on ya battle as soon as I get a chance..
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Voted For: M.F.P
BreakDown lil: Yo, M.F.P stands for a mutha fuckin punk..this guy couldn't rap if he rolled wit a shit load of reynolds wrap in his trunk.// Your style of rhyme should be considered garbage~cuz ya shit is junk.//Stretched wack.....3/10 What you didn't realize is u fuckin wit a Vet..My profile may make me look like a rook but looks can be decieving ,n ya not ready yet.// M.F.P suck dick like a prostiute on a L.A set.// basic.....4/10 I leave you marred n scared wit stiches all over.// Have stumblin and n homless like a bum whos never sober.// weak5/10 You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.// N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.// iight finisher....6/10 overall=18/40 mfp: Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color) damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/ok....5/10 this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/ when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/basic......4/10 Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/ Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/personal.....7/10 Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./ Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./5 overall=21/40 vote=m.f.p |
This was feedback posted for M.F.P
checking something for MFP cuz I'm that much more gangsta than both of you
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Voted For: M.F.P
i vote mfp.. its a close one.. but he had harder punches that hit a little harder.. his structure was wack but so was J's so its hard to judge there.. but overall mfp had this one Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for M.F.P
hmmmmmmmm one sided battle nice verse m.f.p and lil j nice mayne//
i cant vote but i can leave an feedback lil j Yo, M.F.P stands for a mutha fuckin punk..this guy couldn't rap if he rolled wit a shit load of reynolds wrap in his trunk.// Your style of rhyme should be considered garbage~cuz ya shit is junk.// IT WAS AN GOOD OPENER What you didn't realize is u fuckin wit a Vet..My profile may make me look like a rook but looks can be decieving ,n ya not ready yet.// M.F.P suck dick like a prostiute on a L.A set.// ITS AN PUNCH WITH AN PERSONALS I leave you marred n scared wit stiches all over.// Have stumblin and n homless like a bum whos never sober.// You fuckin wit me is impossible, like a midget becoming a Harlem Globetrotter.// N bitch you don't compareto me like the Niagra Falls to a glass of water.// NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH M.F.P Yo this bitch can't beat me.. he's still a jr. hence y he's copyin me/ (same font and glow color) damn i'm so hot i'm a leave him in some blue debris/ HMMMM NICE PUNCH PERSONAL this kid's been uppin the limit jus so he can b on top/ when the truth is... he's nothin but a flop/ // GOOD PUNCH (KINDA) Been Makin Stupid Decisions This Ones Your Last, make it wise/ Like Male Pubic Hair, This kid stays attatched too Guys/ Damn, I spit first, and won't use all 10 lines G, cuz you still can't defy me./ Like a uneconomical coke dealer, I'll even give you two lines for free./ NOT BAD FOR AN CLOSA DIS SHIT GOES TO LIL J IAM POSTIN AN FEEDBACK DIS IS NOT AN VOTE |
Voted For: Lil J76
Both drops were a bit WEAK, but Lil got my v cause his shit was more creative, and the other nigga just basically rode his own dick in his drop. Lil also had more wordplay and multis, BUT I wouldn't say he's no fuckin vet like he says in line 4 tho. all in all Lil's shit was nicer v//LilJ76 aight -1- o and u both could elevate some but thats just bein real no hate just reality Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
And my bad M.F.P. didn't realize we was crew, but the nigga got u elevate nigga this comin from ya own crew aight -1- :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:
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This was feedback posted for M.F.P
lol puling a shottboy ill vote on this. lol jsut checkin it out the scores
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Voted For: M.F.P
M.F.P - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 7/10 J76- Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 6/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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