Eminem- Hello remix- mark schafer and ut man
 

:song link updated:

http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/12002...afer-and-ut-man
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a good song so don't hate or do
left feed on these and many others so cool it el rey
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=251035
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=251003

this song right here, this mutha fucker is number SIX!!! in the emo charts on soundclick, i need to make it to number one or at least get a little feed, FUCKIN SHIT!!!

i like your flow and style..just dont like the song

well, what about it don't u like? that way i could improve it if its honest feedback

link didnt work..........

sorry about that, anytime u use eminem's name u get flagged for copy right shit. but i got it link to a different site now, thanx for checkin it out

^heyyy send me your accapella an beat
let me mix it a little. see what i can do.

ok, give me a sec, i gotta find the acc, hope i saved it

acc
http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/12002...-and-ut-man-acc

instrumental with hook
http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/11993...ello-With-Hook-
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alright. i dont have time at the moment but i will see if i can do something

Not bad, the flow could of been ton's better.. it picks up in a few places than falls in a couple of others, the lyrics could have of been alot better aswell, lol... seriously, what are you talking about lol? rofl @ the "say hello..."hello" ... but yeah, other than the beat being dope you could have done this up nicely...but it was ok.

thanx for an actual opinion, people on here don't have much of one anymore

youve def improved to be honest

oh wow, thanks for the wonderful feed back. i'd like some opinions on the concepts i touch on and what goes into actually makin the song. sayin i've improved from w/e song u may of heard before doesn't mean anything. of course i've improved, but improved how, u have to compare the two to point out where ones better. this site sucks