Do You vs YungStaccz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-04-08 at 03:27 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

YungStaccz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-08 03:27 PM.

listen i got da best flow around you can bet dat.
ill burn you wit my rhymes i spit and leave you sore
you bedda of in da closet jerkin to dora explorer....iz fuck u for da money like u messin wit ho's.only thing u got locked iz when u leavin ya dor....only gramz u ever sold iz when u eatin dem crackers..Stop sayin you pull dimez when really u a meat jacker.fuckin wit staccz ill smoke you like sum indo...when iz beef u da type of nigga thaz hopin out da window....im da type dat will empty da clip in ya kinfolk....u fuckin faget ya hobby iz proly droppin da soap....talk shyt a bout my click, we slittin ya throat...only hood you ever been in was under ya coat.you will shit on ya self if u had to pull a trigga....bitches dont wanna DO YOU cuz u doin other niggaz... if a girl waz singin "ill take ya man" u be singin along wit her...ya rhymes iz negative like a usless pitcure.

Do You has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-08 06:58 PM.

this cat iz fuckin pethetic he been online all day and still aint droped a verse yet

this kid is straight bitch.


you flee from talent. so keep runnin from me, ya shook and
we dont need gone with the wind to express how Y's been bookin
dont focus on me, hit puberty. theres time for that
n when Y raised his voice.. my whole monitor cracked
u bit the wrong shit son. dont prowl on my lines of dark heat
even with discovery channel off its easy to tell this sharks week
dont try fuckin with L. you wont get by shit
im bringin YungStaccz on board just to captain of my hits
the kids a baller. just ask him to toss it up
Y's banging on 20's..i aint no prostitutes cost that much
face it your fucked. just peep the punchline to git wit me
last time i dropped this many lines on pussy i lost my virginity

Voted For: Do You

Ima have to give this on to Do You simply based on the fact that stacks shit was sloppy didnt have a punch that had any kind of weight to them so they're failed attempts...do you shit wasnt much better....his closer was good tho his last two bars were more creative and Hit harder then yungz whole verse
score
yung- punches=2/10
------personalz=5/10
------creativity= 3/10
------multi's=0/10 (hard to tell wit ya structure)
overall 8/40
You-punches= 5/10
personalz=7/10
creativity= 5/10
multi's=1/10
overall=18/40

vote do you!

This was feedback posted for YungStaccz
 

all i gotta say to both of you....is WHAT THE FUCK? you both suck so much fucking dick, holy shit...learn to structure your god damn rhymes....i'm not wasting me time on reading this fucking lame bullshit.....


p.s. GET SOME FUCKING WORDPLAY GOING

-uno NUCCA-

Voted For: Do You

Vote:Do You
verse was alot better and better worded and set.Punches was better too easily.
Staccz you need some more practice but keep working on your shit. Oh and you need to fix your structure badly.

peace

Voted For: YungStaccz

r u serious how did he get them votez, 4 real niggaz need to pay attension to the battle a lil bit more

Yung Staccz All the Way