GBKilla VS Illugin
 

here we go u spit 1st................................Good Luck

iight u sure u dont wanna make any rules before we start?

10 to 20 bars, 15 mins.............................................G O

i thought u were going 1st, heres my shit.

ill do u just like i did that brainsurgein/
ur only illugin/
is thinkin u gon win/
im a bad man and real sik wit it/
ill do this battle here like a piece of paper dog,and just fuckin rip it/
if dog dont worry ill stay calm/
but the only beatin you gan do is wit ur dick in ur palm/
my bad duke sometimes i get real crazy/
but remember u cant faze me/
but please be my guest and just amaze me/
remember the name of this page its called the front line/
ur so gay dude i coulda beat u with out one punch line/

iight iight ...here we go
check it

ill dunk you in a tub of blood then throw u in the ocean/
and laugh when sharks rip apart the half thats seen floatin/
above tha water line/i coulda used hotta lines/
but im laid back now,im relaxed with my rhymes/
im tryn to tell a story/envisioning these gorey/
situations to place you in and no im not sorry/
you can take me on maury/and pour out all the drama/
i wont beat you down im non violent like dahli lamma/(mite of mispelled that)
so you do got a chance,not to win this battle/
but to get 'cher ass kissed,so go 'on scaddle/
get movin'/im provin' on every different level/
for no plain reason,GB's not a rebel/
im a flame breathin devil/
who will burn your confidence with every single rhyme/
spit words so fast consanants stick to yer spine/
and throw it outta line/but i think youve faced the facts/
you should be out workin dawg and not writin raps/

juss cuz thats realli not cool id like to point out that
but to get 'cher ass kissed,so go 'on scaddle
is supposed to be
but to get 'cher ass kicked,so go 'on scaddle

uppn fer votes
and also scaddle is supposed to be scaddadle
sorri fer editin i juss dont want voters to misinterpret words is all

uppn 4 votes again
we need feedback
sum1 give us n e thing

Illugin won this shit clearly.. It looks like GB was just dickin around.. One-Sided battle.. Illugin's Punches were hittin way harda.. Every thing was betta.. holla.. 1

Vote- Illugin

uppn 4 votes......................................

uppn 4 votes we need more than 1 ppl
any feedback is appreciated

Illugin gots this.. he busted a better flow, an he made mo sense.. i really wasent feelin tha other guyz shyt..

2-0 me
lets get so mo votes in
iz it first to 3 or first to 5?
if sum1 can tell me thatd be coo

Aight Break'N It Down

GBKilla: 4/10
Hmm...Well Your Flow Was Decent, But You Need To Work On Word Usuage, Vocab, Metaphors, and Mulits. Elevate All Around Playa.

ILLUGIN: 5/10
Your Flow Was Nice, and You Tried To Throw Punches but Your Word Usuage Needs To Elevate. Mulits and Metaphors Would Be A Nice Addition. Keep Elevating.

Vote - Illugin

~R~

aiight good criticizm
uppn 4 more votes
and restricted u forgot to vote on da poll bro