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xXelementXx 05-05-03 09:21 PM

CraZy
 
::ELEMENT::

I create optical illusions that puts your mind into siezures//
Don't step out of line man, just follow procedure//
I come in every color, different sizes and shapes//
Dont mistake me for another, no disguises, dont hate//
My mind is so demented I need phycollogy//
im goin over bored, dont try an stop me//
a kid on the brink of insanity//
this fucin public likes me so much im in the new issue of vannity//
they dont think im serious//
my rhymes flow through my veins like cancer//
they haunt me like fat haunts a dancer//
no chance sir//
pick you up with a lyrik and you hear it, it goes through your head with a sharp pain like an ear ache//
when I flow all is at stake//
put my mind on the mic and the mic just spits//
everyone sittin in the crowd movin there kicks//
I got many tricks, up my sleave//
some to decieve and beleive//
there so incredible...like hulk//
the only reoson you won your first battle is cus u got ur mom too say u was dope//
but you grab the mic and choke, dont do it again or ill take advantage of you like now and then...//
so the next time you see element around//
just remember if u grab the mic i betta hear some sound//

E-CoSt302

xXelementXx 05-05-03 09:40 PM

c'mon somone gimme some info bout this

xXelementXx 05-05-03 09:52 PM

C'MON YO THE MORE REPLIES I GET THE BETTER ILL UNDERSTAND RAPPIN SO HELP ME OUT PLS HIT ME WITH SO REPLIES

swAy302 05-05-03 10:13 PM

yo dawg that was pretty tite! kepp it up dawg

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a-g 05-05-03 10:30 PM

im feelin this dawg, the syllab was killin it foreals and rhyme structure was hitten it up. foreals but yah hit my shit up when i spit it tommorow aight ~1n~
this was hot 8/10

xXelementXx 05-05-03 10:44 PM

Thankz yo0o ill cheak urs out

Bash 05-05-03 11:28 PM

U need to expand ur vocab dawg ,, , ,,datz tha only thing which is whack about ur flow ,,,,,,,,,,

xXelementXx 05-06-03 07:27 AM

iight thanx yo0o, i'll work on that~>

xXelementXx 05-06-03 07:40 AM

hook me up with some feedback

Artikqlit 05-06-03 09:49 AM

hott shit...feelin this...nice rhyme scheme nd sicc flow..juss needa work on that vocab..

Stay up

BabyBluAccord 05-06-03 10:14 AM

tha shit was hot...it does need more vocab tho

xXelementXx 05-06-03 06:37 PM

thanks yoo0o, ill work on vocab ~><~

InFiNiTe_22 05-06-03 07:51 PM

...vocab....everythin else was on.....keep 2 it....peace easy

skitwitit 05-06-03 08:03 PM

that shit was tight


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