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LM 10-28-03 05:54 AM

Mom I'm sorry
 
This is just a little keystyle. It's about whats goin on in my life right now.


Mom why do we gotta be this way....fightin everyday/
Last night was the worst....we aint even spoke today/
Is there anythin I can say to make it better....to stop the pain/
I hate the fact that when somebody mentions my name you drop your head in shame/
All I got without you is my love for the rap game....thats not enough/
Coz I love you so much....but you've hurt me so I've gotta stand tough/
I feel locked in a world of hate....like I'm handcuffed/
I can't break free....All I wanna do is hear you say I love you Lee/
Mom It's me....your son....please dont abandon me/
One day you'll see I can make you proud/
I'm gonna be somebody one day then you can shout my name out loud/
You can listen to the sound of my voice on a microphone/
Soon we'll forget all the nightmares of livin in a broken home/
I cant wait til that day coz right now I feel lonely and alone/
Mom please call me on me cell phone/
We patch things up in a hurry/
I'll make the first move....mom I'm sorry/.


Explaination:
Lee - my name
The rest is self explainitory

LM 10-28-03 05:56 AM

On the second to last line I was meant to say :
We need to patch things up in a hurry/

^^^I forgot to write need^^^

LM 10-28-03 07:49 AM

Uppin for feedback.......................................... ................................


Peace!!!

nasflowdefinite 10-28-03 10:51 AM

man, i am feeling this peice so much, it is bringing tears to my eyes. but hings will be ok, just give it time. i went through the same things with my mom. But don't let it go too long, you are never garrunteed tomorrow.

R.I.P. Daisy (I Love You)

LM 10-28-03 11:05 AM

Yo thanks for the comment man.

menolin 10-28-03 11:09 AM

yo it was a nice peice man, jus keep doin wat ya doin, yo we shud do a collab sum time

LM 10-28-03 11:15 AM

Yeah sounds good to me. Yo I'll Pm you....got some updates to report.

LM 10-28-03 11:58 AM

Uppin for feedback

LM 10-28-03 12:35 PM

Uppin for feedback

nasflowdefinite 10-28-03 01:58 PM

damn, i just have to keep reading it, i'm glad to have gotten in touch with you, or vise versa, whatever, it happened, i got some more things that i can type up for you and email if you want it

LM 10-28-03 03:03 PM

^^^That makes it sound like he wrote it.
I wanna announce that this open mic peice is by LM and nobody else.

nasflowdefinite 10-28-03 03:12 PM

my bad man, i was directiong it toward you though, like i was talking to you, My fault

LM 10-28-03 03:14 PM

No big deal. Besides your ones would be a lot better than that

nasflowdefinite 10-28-03 03:36 PM

naa man you are better!!!!, I am just trying to get in here

LM 10-28-03 04:03 PM

That was my first open mic.
I'm more of a battler but I open mic is the next step for me....that and my crew


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