Verse 5
 

Yo this, Venom'll, knock you off ya pedastool
You get shivers anytime i drop incredible
If you aint fellin this, i will insist, you still admit
Im spillin shit, illa than most cats with skill and it,
Aint a thang, for me drop at a rate the the same
As, chingy, 50, buck or lets say a game
But honestly i'd rather, not go backwords
I'd rather rap with the talent of Hov or mathers
As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers
Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards
Either die or resign im weeded and drank sour
Mash, biddin my time, no reason to wait hours
Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict
Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique
Im outfitted to plow critics, wont get outwitted
And i cant describe the way my style shitted,
All over these hoes that pose as no threat
If i go first it'll make my foes sweat
And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the,
Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a
Spectacular, faded state, while you sulk and playa hate
You say i wont make it, shit, i say its fate.

nice drop homie everything look on point 2 me but wut the hell is vernacular man? n im not bien a hata i seriously dont kno so dont front...peep my lyrical hustla link in my sig

Dopeness fams !! like the change up in flow,... nice vocab,..

top bar:
Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict
Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique
^Dope^

P.s Vernacular = Lingo, Language

Stay up Anx

1~

this joint was tight shawty, i was feelin the way you carried over bar after bar that was pretty gully. it keep me readin it. Erething in the joint was nice.

As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers
Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards
^^^
That was my fav bar outta the thing.
hit me back on my shit.......be easy

haven't seen you in awhile there ajax, You still got it though. flow was on point and the storyline was there. just some shit I'd like to hear on a song. overall decetn drop keep doin it. 1

illy drop mayne

"All over these hoes that pose as no threat
If i go first it'll make my foes sweat
And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the,
Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a"

haha, i'd love hearin this on a audio...it'd be dope fa'real.
keep tha skill goin folk

Word im gonna record a bunch of open mics to songs once i get my comp and mic for christmas. Thanks for the feed back.