aight here is a better track
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3376101


^ somethings fucked up with it just click it a couple of times

leave feed plzz

hellooooooooooo

The beat is real grimey soundin .... i fucks with it ... verse one wasn't spectacular ... the violence was wild.... but i like the hook.... verse 2 better than the first .... the flow seemed easier to come out... i see ya wordplay...3rd beginning flow seemed choppy ... grown man on menstrual shit... coo line... Overall... if all ur verses where solid around the hook .. it could bang ...some parts in ya verse i was just like .. uhhhh ok... keep bangin