~Saga Continues~A must read
 

Since the dawn of man, he has dwelled at the edge of reality,
Resting in solitude. from the great battle with the dark forces of destruction.

But evil can never be completely destroyed,
Never made extinct, Slowly, the eternal malignant storm grew.
And from the darkness, the evil descended once again to feed on the world.

To delight in its Annihilation,
To revel in chaos and pain,
But fear no, for behold the warrior awakes.
He rises from his slumber to spread his wings of justice once again,
The warrior returns, resurrected to defend us all.

And now, the Saga continues...

Behold, the glorious Battle begins!

i liked this for it was different. with a different message, but a strong one. you explained yourself pretty well, and made it understandable. it was short, and could be built onto more. with more detail, but the detail you did give was well written, just needs more.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

..Uppin..

..Still uppin..

..what the fu*k???...where's the love people???..LOL!!!

heh....your structure with this needs work...or this could have been something very good....(pm me if you have questions by the way)...i understoood the wordplay that you used...but some of the words that you incorperated into your sentences didn't flow so well...the imagery that went with this was well thought out...but you lacked some pictures here and there

igido...