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1 evil idea
1 executor 1 moment 2 buildings 2 hours 2 many people 3 witnesses 3 taken to the hospital 3 numbers dialed 4 firefighters 4 police officers 4 heros 5 pictures of victims 5 more body bags 5 pieces of the puzzle we haven't found 6 volunteers 6 orphan children 6 more body bags 7 bussiness effected 7 more questions? 7 more puckets of black power 8 nights 8 more body bags 8 cities warned 9 last few breaths 9 last few moments 9/11 |
guess no one likes this one.....:(
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i think tha concept was good, i like to see ppl make they own shyt, an tha way it was it was structured gave it character, but couldve been more elaborate...
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i thought it was ok. a little bit weak but honestly not all that bad. keep up
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I liked it. It's different than all of the stuff I usually read. You probably could have put more to it though, instead of such short lines. More details, I guess is what I mean.
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yeah i know its kinda short without details but thats like how i made it somehow....but yeah..thanks
uppin! |
I really didn't get into this peace could have been arranged alot better.
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