reddot06 vs. traxik
 

aight u spit first.... 10-15 lines... spit in 10... no crew or hater votes

Aight,

The red dot won't be your name, It'l be on your head,
Cos boi you kno when I catch up to ya, you gon' be dead,
I don't mean to cause offense, Cos i kno you light-hearted,
But jus cos yous a pussy, don't mean you can't be rap-darted,
Your rhymes are never equal, to the level I can reach,
If you ever want to get better, you know that I can teach,
But with a dude like you there might be no reason,
You so dumb, you thought september was a season,
I'm gonna wrap this up with the minimum 10 lines,
Cos you might try hard, it won't be as good as mines.

That int that gud i kno, but lets see what you got RedDot

you dont know who u dealin with, this tha dot
youre like a dime ho so easily bought
your rhymes suck you have the right to remain silent
if you dont this battles gonna get real violent
you say my rhymes are weak, dont be a hater
they way i rule this battle some call me a dictator
find ur body washed up on the shore a week later
you is blind while im a visionary
last night i took ur mom and the style was missionary
your gay i had you liked penus
your brainz soo good some call you a genius (brains=head)
no that i know that traxik aint got shit
im gonna end this battle... with one last hit
you think you a gangsta when your just a fag
this battles over i got it in the bag....

sorry this line... your gay i had you liked penus... should be...your gay i heard you liked penus

alright people start votin on this.... thank you..

both of da verses wasnt real good u each didnt have a lot of punches either. the verses were bout da same but i think reddot06 came a lil harder than traxik but both of yall doin ya thang
v/reddot06

ok neither of the verses were good but dot u had punches that connected and had some meaning to them. also u had a good flow but traxik u need work on rhymes flow structure jus everything keep practicin both of u

v/reddot

Thanks 4 the votes both of ya, even tho they werent 4 me yeh, I'm new to the rap game, just tryin 2 get my style goin, gettin the hang of battlin and that.
Nice One on the tips, but shame bout the vote

^^^^ aight homeboy keep doin ya thang n u gone be hot someday stay up

Man i going to be honest, you bought were terrible! :help:

aight lemme break it down..
ya verses werent tha best...trax u gotta elevate man in err thing..yur flow was ok
dot u had better flow,,,punches and a better verse ova all so
u still gotta elevate ya shit tho
but my vote goes to reddot06
be easy holla at ma battle in ma sig wun...

your brainz soo good some call you a genius (brains=head)
lol

reddot got dizz made more sense and flow waz much betta

I felt that both of u could have done better, but i love a verse that catches my eye so i have to go with reddot, cause some of his bars was funny ass hell to me. Big up to both!!

Vote: reddot06

well I would say most of Traxik verse wasn't really funny as hell
to me the structure was good though & reddot06 that was a
pretty good drop I would say the line that will make you win w/o
a doubt is this:


"your gay i had you liked penus
your brainz soo good some call you a genius"

my favourite line funny as hell lol

vote goes to: reddot06