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¤ÐÅž¤ 04-13-05 01:14 AM

22 Bars Of Pure Creative Dissin (all of RV"even you")...¤ÐÅž¤...
 

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Look , RV’s Flow aint straight like the tower of Piza, who needs ya
Be like tha Q, …….cuz hes always usta bitten the hand that feeds ya
Get what im implying..? fine, literally, his lines just ”never-mind
Aint no lieing, L.I.’s text is weak shit, even wit his name in rewind.
distilled I aint no Christian, but I bust wraps..n your package is still missin!
It aint personal…so listen.. it’s a battle site..and yes I manage the dissin
Hey 9th degree the fights on, you in the streets? but only as a pile-on,
Who's a has-been wit“U”gone ? its Spul…RV’s new whacktastic rap icon!
Its funny, ya prolly think Jack is foul, battle’him, he’ll throw in the towel
grate like gravel ? nah…he only gets Pat's when sayin”ide like 2 buy a vowel”
keep sight of this..i’ll leave Jdot right of fists…he was caught in spite of this
left as tight as his miss..? nah cuz even his riders are saying He might’ve bit
N Bones you shouldn’t stare homes, switched wit a vet.. but still unknown
No1’s throned , T.E just pulling text outta their ass’s leavin’em bare boned
RV’s wack spastic menaces.. all with 0-0 recs spit-ten Pathetic sentences.
ya lames seem endless n don’t connect with tracks like magnetic forensics
Who’s who?..wacks, lames, herbs n vets say threats more then actions foo
GW ,fuck-ya crew…, cuz a sess-pool has more natural flow then you do
Who’s gay next.! Triple N flex..... he’ll prolly say that was uncalled for I bet(rofl)
Then theres Lay-text, ..who don’t lay vets even if RV was a damn porno set
Should I stop it, I mean what about that newkid and "Jimmy the hobbit
pop shit or lost it? punch me! How? when ya hands are stuck in ya pocketz"
Kesse diss guys(disguise)ya wackness..do you stretch bars 4 practice?
I spit the facts kid… and ghost writers have just drove par with wackness
Who’s nemesis? the wackness of mimesis?....but both spitters diminish-in-
Battles they’ve finished in…. killing noobs don’t gain you recognition-in-
Strobes books, here’s a low-blow to this net geek hobo homo…oh no..
I lost my flow…. Bann my ass…cuz I still aint hearing that fuck(in)Echo
Ready get set GO..! King Y@Yo..yes well your skill is UM. Untraceable
<that cats defiantly e-rasable..diss red bull…hell nah..just rip off his label
Who DV8's for more? If you don’t make me cum hard ill ‘Fiya the whore’
You settle the score? Its in his name but he never makes use of Metaphors
Its like Em flipping the bird stan, It’s the last resort which is Herb-land
the OM.Band don’t spin no more, cuz he's Played out like “$wordman$”
crushed?..sounds like a sitter talking, n SikezstWun’s neva spitten bitter toxins
I don’t care what ya thoughts is, d-rock gets pissed on more then litter boxes
Lack of votes im stunned, banned cuz Decree’s raps look like dumb grunge
& C.S is a slum bunch, they open up for anyone….. kinda like a c.um s.ponge
We all know morse codes cracked like a Black queen who likes blow
plus vango’s lost his flow ever since he signed himself on those dyke hoes
go get signed then tossed, cuz really to infect-your mindz it would cost
this lines for nos, cuz hes not clean witted even if his mind was flossed
who’s ¤ÐÅž¤, well hes a spaz., i mean he just dissed all of rv, will he last?
fuck don’t ask…. Do the math, do YOU think you could merk his ass?
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:thumbup: This has been a very sow-low production :thumbup:
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to all mentioned, nothin personal
this is just another concept..pz






50Cal. 04-13-05 02:00 AM

ok this was pretty decent i got some shit like this talking bout porn stars it was pretty good alot of shit would slide past people on wax so text fits this good as hell here the flows a lil off disses aint great but ok creativity its ok like i said ive done this as has alot of others but it surpasses and is pretty decent id say a 7/10

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-13-05 02:17 AM

Thanx For The Honesty Cali, Like I Was Sayin, It Was A Bitch To Try N Incorporate All The Members.....i Think A Couple Of Personals Directed At Certain People Flew Over Your Head, But I Figured Alot Of It Was Going To Be Like That......looking At It Now, I Relieze Im Tired As Hell..........

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-13-05 02:39 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185944

Ysdat 04-13-05 03:09 AM

Fam this is dope...cali did state that this sorta thing has been done before..but never like this..

Your creativity is on point..flow is good...originality in disses locked in for you..
vocab is good.

My opinion...best rv diss i have ever read.....

Status 04-13-05 03:39 AM

i didnt get dissed wooooooooooot woooooooooooooooooooot

DQ 04-13-05 06:51 AM

Why didn't I get dissed :( *disappointed*

Lemme break this down: flow is nice, maybe a bit off here and there but overall, I was feeling it. Punches were nice, good creativity in there and you dropped some mad personals to cats on here. Found good balance in your vocab and structure was good as well, like how you bolded the names so it's easier to see who exactly gets dissed.

Solid diss right here!

DQ

Dirty Nigga 04-13-05 08:27 AM

DUDE!!
This was mad hot, real hard hittin
but ugggggh, i had my verse, i did like over 50 lines of dissin an yo' pm's was full!!!

Jason 04-13-05 09:54 AM

Wow Used My Name Man , Wow, Any Way The Rest Pretty Decent Man

Ice Pick 04-13-05 11:54 AM

Im pissed all these diss threads and none for me

Sweft 04-13-05 12:34 PM

wow, all I can say this is way better than I can ever do.. Creativity was great..

"Who’s who?..wacks, lames, herbs n vets say threats more then actions foo
GW ,fuck-ya crew…, cuz a sess-pool has more natural flow then you do"

I hella laughed at this one.. but what get's me.. When you can have people upset that you didn't use their name in a diss. Like, they feel let down. :itchin' head: *Still ponderin'* hmm, I don't know.. Hella wicked weird to me...

But over all this was a solid drop.. over all I give it 9/10 Keep this up man..
Late
Sweft

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-13-05 12:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ice Pick
Im pissed all these diss threads and none for me

if you was online yesterday, you may have been dissed
but if you hide ya name(offline) then i kinda forgot bout you
lol,..esco,sorry man io was wondering why i didnt get ya verse yesterday
meh..........thanx for the feed peeps.....srry if i missed ya...lol :thumbup:

Germ 04-13-05 01:07 PM

this was pretty dope....flowed nicely, good creativity in there, i thought there'd be a little more members, lol...but still was good, had me laughing good on some lines, like the jdot line, lol....and my line, you bastard, meh, i knew id probly pop up after my diss....word to daz, keep up

p4ntzistheish 04-13-05 03:18 PM

OOH diss me next lol...this was hot...liked this a lot...8/10 rtf if you haven't already

Nynth Degree 04-13-05 03:20 PM

Lol somebody finally dissed me. What up Daz, ain't talked to you in a minute. But good shit right there, dope throughout its entirity. Keep up the good work :thumbup:.


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