Fuck RV
 

rhymes-fluently-potent these hoes,...'just-skip-postin' take time ta consider ya health//
Dont come to BS talkin shit bitch cuz tha 'registration process',...is tha only way u makin a name fo ya self//
punches-get-delt wit deadly accurace,...harass me!!! an find out Blaze dont fuck around//
but dont tell BS 'PBB put me on my ass',...when u where 'layin face down'!!!//
whata fuckin clown,u want what-now,...shhhhhhhh dont make no noise//
or i'll peel back tha 'skin from ya head ' like 'uncircumsized boys'//
damn man, 'ya turned me to peter pan'*** rockin wit this 'shadow of mine//'
face-it when tha 'heart monitor stops' be tha only time u droppin 'staright lines'//
jeez my neez take it eez dont be disrespectin tha crews and the boss//
cuz like 'leaves on trees in da winter'nigga you will 'fall off'//

you fucking suck. even your structure is fucked. why do you put // at the end of each bar? is that so we know what words you're trying to rhyme? go back to your playhouse faggot.

I can't get on you like him It was decent but does need work. Your structure and multies need work. Everything else was ok.

damn man, 'ya turned me to peter pan'*** rockin wit this 'shadow of mine//'
face-it when tha 'heart monitor stops' be tha only time u droppin 'staright lines'//

Best line. The structure needs work like duke said but it was decent. Not the best but not the worst. Keep banging homy.